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Date Posted: 03:04:04 04/01/08 Tue
Author: Meade E. Ocre
Subject: Re: The Continuing Ineptness of China Millman
In reply to: BD Essem 's message, "Re: The Continuing Ineptness of China Millman" on 19:05:16 03/31/08 Mon

So which Block is she related to and-or a personal friend of? Or is she tied to the "Seen" snobs out in Fox Chapel?

She is a CRITIC. By the very definition, her articles
>reflect her personal opinion about the places she
>reviews; an opinion hopefully well trained and
>refined. Unlike a movie or even live theatre
>reviewer, a restaurant/dining critic must comment on
>the service/food that he/she personally receives.
>
>How would it help her reviews if she said, "One diner
>had to wait fifteen minutes to receive water and a
>menu;" rather than, "I had to wait fifteen minutes to
>receive water and a menu?" If that is really your
>hang up, then keep beating the drum, but realize how
>petty that complaint really is in this context.
>
>Again, as others have said, she is a huge improvement
>over Liz Downer. She understands food and how to
>convey the quality of a restaurant far, far better
>than her predecessor. Your (and others) issues are
>really a matter of style and taste (too personal,
>etc.), but in terms of giving the flavor of the place
>she is reviewing, she is a welcome change from Downer.
>
>
>>Competent journalists don't inject themselves into
>>their stories. Inept journalists and critics cannot
>>help but do so. Millman most definitely falls into the
>>latter category. Her faults ("I" "me") are no less
>>profound than Downer's.
>>
>>
>>>Couldn't agree more. I think Millman is a decent
>>>writer, a good critic and a 489,000 percent
>>>improvement over Liz "I'm from San Francisco, do you
>>>know where that is?" Downer.
>>>
>>>I liked the use of the word "inflection" in that
>>>context, think it worked well, but then again, I
>>>didn't get straight As on all my 5th grade vocabulary
>>>tests. I bet the poster who started this thread had
>>>all of his/hers still up on the refrigerator.
>>>
>>>
>>>>wow. you really got her where she lives. that was
>>>>incredible. I'll bet management at the PG will read
>>>>your
>>>>well prepared, passionately argued critique of this
>>>>woman's use of the word "inflection" and call her in
>>>>to give her the heave ho.
>>>>
>>>>it's posts like yours that will prevent this board
>>>>from ever being a place to discuss the issues facing
>>>>pg journalism. as long as people use this board to
>>>>launch nastly little attacks against people they
>>don't
>>>>like (or, as I'll wager in this case, envy) this
>will
>>>>be a place limited to 1. wanna be's, 2. has
>beens,
>>>>and 3. people who are currently gainfully employed
>>in
>>>>the local industry and check the board only to make
>>>>sure someone isn't taking a nasty pot shot at them.
>>>>
>>>>the only "issue" in your post, i'd argue, is that
>you
>>>>wish you were the pg restaurant critic.
>>>>
>>>>
>>>>
>>>>> >>>>>href="http://www.post-gazette.com/pg/08087/868111-2
>4
>>2
>>>.
>>>>s
>>>>>tm">http://www.post-gazette.com/pg/08087/868111-242
>.
>>s
>>>t
>>>>m
>>>>>

>>>>>
>>>>>My favorite sentences:
>>>>>
>>>>>"On one visit, they were garnished simply with
>>>>>Shropshire blue cheese. On another, chorizo and
>>>>>Shropshire blue lent the dish a Spanish
>inflection."
>>>>>
>>>>>The American Heritage definition of "inflection."
>>>>>
>>>>>"The act of inflecting or the state of being
>>>>inflected.
>>>>>Alteration in pitch or tone of the voice.
>>>>>
>>>>>Grammar
>>>>>
>>>>>- An alteration of the form of a word by the
>>addition
>>>>>of an affix, as in English dogs from dog, or by
>>>>>changing the form of a base, as in English spoke
>>from
>>>>>speak, that indicates grammatical features such as
>>>>>number, person, mood, or tense.
>>>>>An affix indicating such a grammatical feature, as
>>>the
>>>>>-s in the English third person singular verb form
>>>>>speaks.
>>>>>The paradigm of a word.
>>>>>
>>>>>- A pattern of forming paradigms, such as noun
>>>>>inflection or verb inflection.
>>>>>
>>>>>- A turning or bending away from a course or
>>position
>>>>>of alignment."
>>>>>
>>>>>So Millman, the great food writer, doesn't even
>have
>>>>>her word usage straight? She can't tell
>"inflection"
>>>>>from "flavor" or "overtone?"
>>>>>
>>>>>It's bad enough that by the last graf, she thinks
>>>>>readers might care to hear about how she
>effectively
>>>>>"outed" herself as a "critic" by showing up at this
>>>>>obviously nice bistro on a night when most
>customers
>>>>>are known regulars. I call this "padding."
>>>>>
>>>>>Another couple of these turkeys and someone's gonna
>>>>>start a "bring back Lizzie" movement.

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