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Date Posted: 13:35:32 02/05/03 Wed
Author: Lil Lucky
Author Host/IP: cblmdm65-221-33-25.buckeye-express.com / 65.221.33.25
Subject: War

hey, just listen, no time to glissen/
no time, for platnum things, or 7 inch dimond rings/
no time for feed and do, no time to speed and roll/
no time to worry about dimes, listen dawg, cause we all out of time/
this war, look, i know its gona come/
and all i can do is load my gun/
cause i cant stand, to lay back and watch them fry/
if this war comes, we all gona die/
so i wont lie, im put, my rhymes a straight/
but i aint gone run, im gona, make my fate/
you should look into there eyes/
look into there lifes/
look at the look on there face when they scream and cry/
cause i know, sadam, be running the show/
but his coward bitch ass, were he hiden, only god know/
now this flow, aint trying to top the list/
and i aint tryin to make neone pissed/
but to let you know, if u fuck with my friends or Hos/
ima pull you down, and deliver, leathel blows/
but back to the deal, i always pack steal/
i always have infared, loaded on my hip, or heal/
and ima come threw with a platnum grill/
and i make all my flows,thats for real/
about this war, sadam, you gona get tore/
you might have chems, but i got more/
you might be rich, but i ant poor/
im a gona say it how it is/
ima let lose with my platnum biz/
and you aint gona fuck with my platnum hits/
if you do, you gona get drilled by my platnum hollow tips/
bitch i aint fontin, im statin the truth/
and bitch you would kill, for my diomond tooth/
and who knew, that i knew were to look/
sadam you gona get paralized, when i conect the left hook/

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Just a quick 3 minute, freestyle, wanted to get it out there. My first spit ever. -- Lil Lucky, 13:40:28 02/05/03 Wed
You had a lot of ideas in this post that weren't even concentrated on correctly....Example, you started off talking about this upcoming "war"....Then threw in some lines about "platinum" this and "hoes".....C'mon man, center your thoughts....especially the ones you want to express on the Lounge.....Keep up and stay up... (NT) -- h � k �/|_ A \/�...., 13:42:50 02/05/03 Wed
This was pretty simplistic even for a key but keep elevating and working on tha structure of things....PeAcE ! (NT) -- Eternal Student (UK), 14:24:10 02/05/03 Wed
umm.. it irratated me cause of how it was worded.. hex is right with what he said.. keep your focus on your topic don't stray from your plan.. keep steady man.. peace! (NT) -- Pathologist "The Catalyst of ELOHEIM!", 16:58:14 02/05/03 Wed
You both are right, and i knew right away, i got off the topic, and im sorry for teh inconvenianc. -- LIL Lucky, 23:17:35 02/05/03 Wed

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