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Date Posted: 20:03:51 02/05/03 Wed
Author: Vis
Author Host/IP: AC9B1E38.ipt.aol.com / 172.155.30.56
Subject: ....another post for your viewing pleasure....

alone in this world, i came alone, i go the alone
no friends, not even my own soul to hold
bold with my actions cause they speak louder
aura, my temper flares to the tp of heaven's towers
lord restrict my anger and hatred boils from ancient
toils, break these anklets and these chained bracelets
vile restraintments people will feel my statements
for years while my words merely exist with my peers
and if not my fears will be fulfilled, i appear
a simple being, whats my purpose and reason
to host a life source, im pleading, i cant find meaning
thoughts exceeding my mind's compacity
cause the images began to stretch elacticly
distorting my decisions God gave me the talent buildin
abandon my feelins i hold a heartless chest
and this is still art at its best scars carress
my physical and mentality inside my head stirs calamities
that cant be expressed to any man but me

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short and to the point pretty good lil' drop man! (NT) -- Pathologist "The Catalyst of ELOHEIM!", 20:09:31 02/05/03 Wed
This seemed like it flowed right off the last joint I read from you. Almost like it was a second verse to a song. The flow was nice, it had a different feel to it.....Keep doin what you do (NT) -- ßråil:The√ísíóηárψ of Κa†a¢lÿzm, 22:45:07 02/05/03 Wed
THIS WAS pretty tight man..i was diggin the flow (NT) -- BLAK EARTH, 01:09:16 02/06/03 Thu
nice flow.. nice release of thoughts... peace (NT) -- MORBID ARMOR, 01:31:42 02/06/03 Thu

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