<font color=white>MORBID beyond Belief... MORBID beyond your average demented madman...<font color=lime>MORBID Is I... MORBID Is Me... and MORBID is Myself.... <font color=red>Enjoy!!! -- The Lounge Of Lyricism 2003

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Date Posted: 01:25:37 02/06/03 Thu
Author: MORBID ARMOR
Author Host/IP: ACA06423.ipt.aol.com / 172.160.100.35
Subject: MORBID beyond Belief... MORBID beyond your average demented madman...MORBID Is I... MORBID Is Me... and MORBID is Myself.... Enjoy!!!

I leave emcees down for the count like Dracula in elevators
the illest rhyme spitter and nay-sayer above and below the equator
spit raw material to scorch opponents
I'm a higher power like exponents...my tongue spits the potenance
raw material and warrior-like with my battle stance
this rhythmatic trance is omni-advanced
the poetic flow mimicks a chant dance
this cortexed threat is vortexed with vexxed threats of my opponents deaths
my words burn my own lyrinax...blazing arrows released from the depths
I walk through walls like Qwazaar... in the gloom of night I resemble a shooting star
even Meaty Ogres with Galapagos 4 emblems recieve scars
my words are bizarre... my defeat a freak accident like Marilyn Manson in a crashed car
pulsate the rhymestate till my pupils dialate
negate the syllables to enunciate properly the words and their weights between kicks and drum breaks
feather-footsteps of ninjas mimick paper weights
as whirlwinds of punchlines and metaphors infatuate like stories of Jesus crucified to a stake
at birth the embillical chord was soldered to that of a mic chord
my tongue forms into a medieval broadsword
sworn to clip the pety emcees at their vital chords

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this was ill shit man..keep droppin shit like this man..peace (NT) -- ~!~BLAk EARTH~!~, 01:30:31 02/06/03 Thu
I don't now about ill but it was pretty tight, you gotta spell your words right man it makes it hard to take you serious.. but keep writing, you can spit some real dope shit if you challenge yourself. (NT) -- Pathologist "The Catalyst of ELOHEIM!", 01:44:55 02/06/03 Thu
- my bad my eyes are tired.. you only spelled a couple words wrong.. damn I'm tired, peace! (NT) -- Path, 01:48:53 02/06/03 Thu
yo, dun............................. -- LIPS, 01:51:09 02/06/03 Thu
Short but for what it had was pretty fucking ill, nice post keep up PEACE (NT) -- Pat D.A.W.G, 02:38:28 02/06/03 Thu
I dont know man.. ive heard a lot of lines like this before.. doubt you were trying to copy or nothin, but make sure your punches stand out like "oh shit i wish i coulda thought of that" like "You're jsut a clown to kids that are sick, Like Patch Adams"(hope no one said that before me..) work on it.. be impressive! (NT) -- ===||Swords-The-World..-if-you're-not-scared-yet-you're-not-paying-enough-attention-->, 03:35:08 02/06/03 Thu
Yeah the punches were nice just not great...but this was kinda ill and a nice post...but Jesus was crucifed to a "cross" y'see, that's why it was cross-shaped...it was a hint...lol Nice post man...Stay up (liked the M.Manson line, it was funny) Peace (NT) -- ΜικΜαQ:TheΣxpressionist of Κa†a¢lÿzm, 08:50:06 02/06/03 Thu
...eehh...flow was cool....2 out of the 3 nicest lines in here have been used already...the Down for the Count line could have been worded better.... the rest were pretty much filler, if it were to be an actual battle verse....pretty cool shit....p'Z (NT) -- N.a.K.I.X.e.M. of Abzent Minded Ink. of O.M.N.I., 11:10:53 02/06/03 Thu

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