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Date Posted: 21:17:51 08/18/04 Wed In reply to: playswithmatches 's message, ".blackandwhiteandredallover." on 10:39:11 08/10/04 Tue well first off as a writer, the poem kinda sucks the redundancy of the song either has a meaning behind it besides a location or type of society that being said, the first stanza is similar to the last stanza in that it mentions the song. now song could mean that song had to do with their relationship. or the person really sucks at making a metaphor that is consistent with what they're trying to say by repeating it the way it is, it makes me think that this writer is extremely immature, and that their writing style in this poem was completely focused on their emotions at the moment well u cant refer to a jukebox and a piano as the same thing two totally differnt experiences have u been to a live piano concert? personally i think its just some chick that got attached to some guy who was a rockstar. like some little girl in love with incubus's brandon or whatever. then she cried when he didn't respond to her fan mailwhy would u compare your love to a song played on a jukebox then compare it to the notes on a piano they were trying to stress the song waay too much well the reason i dont get it is cus its the narrator/writer who is sad and wants to sever the relationship whether it be from themself or fromt he other person. they hear it on a jukebox. which would be crappy quality, you know like second hand experience. whereas when he/she ends it it talks about how the haunting notes on the piano relate to what "we" call our own. so the fact that she's saying her experience is secondhand. and that their experience was the original. then why would u talk about cutting yourself off. it would make more sense if she felt the original and "they" felt second hand if he/she was breaking away from it [ Next Thread | Previous Thread | Next Message | Previous Message ] |
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