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Date Posted: 17:31:11 07/24/08 Thu GMT-5
Author: Roger
Author Host/IP: ppp677.dsl.ontario.net / 209.159.178.169
Subject: Re: Comma use
In reply to: Lori 's message, "Re: Comma use" on 16:57:39 07/24/08 Thu GMT-5

Thanks, Lori. This piece still needs a bit of rewriting to get rid of some of the tellin' when I should oughta be showin'.

;)

Roger


>Good on you, Roger, send it out!
>
>Personally, I would omit the comma. Using it isn't
>incorrect but you already have "and" which separates
>your clauses. I think the movement these days is to
>use as few commas as you can get away with. I was
>advised by an editor some years ago to do that and I
>think my stuff flows better as a result.
>
>Glad to hear you're sending stuff out. Oh, the joy, eh?
>
>Cheers,
>
>Lori
>
>PS: I think Lynne Truss has a stick up her, er, back.
>
>
>
>>I am looking at a story, revising it to send out
>>(ahem!) and wonder if the following sentence needs a
>>comma (or for that matter if this sentence does...) :
>>
>>"Even the death of the youngest chick, and the
>>unceremonious dumping of the body by the mother didn’t
>>dampen his enthusiasm for the birds."
>>
>>I reckon it's either, a) doesn't need a comma
>> b) does
>> c) needs a comma after 'mother,'
>>too
>>or d) doesn't matter
>>
>>I read Lynne Truss, and I don't want to be guilty of a
>>yob's comma.

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