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Date Posted: 16:50:36 12/22/08 Mon
Author: Stink Hole
Subject: Re: point-to-point is cock-to-cock again
In reply to: Literary Professor 's message, "Re: point-to-point is cock-to-cock again" on 15:11:45 12/22/08 Mon

>Hey Fucksticks ...... Haiku is made up of phonetic
>units of 5, 7, 5 metrical phrases.
>
>At least Scott, the homo, is getting it right.
>
>The rest of you (aka - Meremac Grads), need to take a
>refresher course before you post you own poems

Maybe you're the fuckstick for not helping a brother out. In this case "Meat me in St. Lous" could of used a hand up not an ass ram. Now I'm pretty sure my poem was correct. But let us see if we can clean up the incorrect one. See if you can do better.

Original:

I'm the man wife
My a-hole opens wide for cock
Cum inside please


My revision:

I am the man wife
My ass opens wide for cock
Cum inside me please!

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