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Date Posted: 19:34:27 08/04/09 Tue
Author: Fruit Booter
Subject: Re: Time for Haiku
In reply to: The Professor 's message, "Re: Time for Haiku" on 21:22:24 08/03/09 Mon

>I am going to have to send this back for a re-write.
>There is no reference to cycling, Russ's sexual
>orientation or the length of Scott's capri's.
>
>However, the meter was correct.
>
>>Rollerblade lifestyle,
>>Filled with many dilemmas
>>Telling Dad I'm gay


Sorry, passed too many fruits on skates today at the park.

Here's your re-write:

Change your user name
Dudes drop loads in your shit box
Should be 'tip-to-tip'

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