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Okay -- Diane, 10:00:56 04/04/05 Mon
Never Beta's before, but I'd like some honest feedback about the first four chapters I've written of a new story. Thanks.

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Okay - Chapter 1 -- Diane, 10:02:02 04/04/05 Mon

first things first -- sk, 23:17:37 04/09/05 Sat

Thanks! -- Diane, 11:45:44 04/10/05 Sun

Okay, just a few quick things. -- Shanola, 19:20:53 04/12/05 Tue

Re: Okay, just a few quick things. -- Diane, 21:42:46 04/13/05 Wed

Okay - Chapter 2 -- Diane, 10:08:04 04/04/05 Mon

Sorry about posting the entire chapter above. Oops! (NT) -- Diane, 10:13:03 04/04/05 Mon

Hey, Diane -- Shanola, 18:54:59 04/12/05 Tue

Hmm. -- Shanola, 19:32:45 04/12/05 Tue

Re: Hmm. -- Diane, 21:49:15 04/13/05 Wed

Okay - Chapter 3 -- Diane, 10:09:59 04/04/05 Mon

Whoa! -- Shanola, 19:49:49 04/12/05 Tue

Re: Whoa! -- Diane, 21:56:54 04/13/05 Wed

Yes, but... -- Shanola, 04:54:08 04/14/05 Thu

See "Elena's Death" below.. (NT) -- Diane, 18:23:50 04/14/05 Thu

Chapter 3 - Alternate Version -- Diane, 12:19:42 04/16/05 Sat

Okay - Chapter 4 -- Diane, 10:11:28 04/04/05 Mon

Okay. -- Shanola, 19:57:38 04/12/05 Tue

Re: Okay. -- Diane, 22:10:13 04/13/05 Wed

Re: Okay. -- Shanola, 04:57:29 04/14/05 Thu

Elena's death -- Diane, 18:18:31 04/14/05 Thu

My thoughts -- Persephone, 19:04:16 04/14/05 Thu

Interesting idea -- Diane, 19:28:49 04/14/05 Thu

Chapter 4 - Alternate Version -- Diane, 16:40:34 04/16/05 Sat

Re: Chapter 4 - Alternate Version -- Shanola, 17:18:16 04/20/05 Wed

Re: Chapter 4 - Alternate Version -- Diane, 17:39:32 04/22/05 Fri

Okay - Chapter 5 -- Diane, 17:06:15 04/16/05 Sat

Chapter 5 - Read this one intead, please -- Diane, 17:10:59 04/16/05 Sat

Re: Chapter 5 - Read this one intead, please -- Shanola, 17:28:39 04/20/05 Wed

Re: Chapter 5 - Read this one intead, please -- Diane, 17:48:48 04/22/05 Fri

Okay. Please give me a few days, as the weekends are rather busy for me. (NT) -- Shanola, 06:22:11 04/23/05 Sat

Okay - Chapter 6 -- Diane, 18:00:09 04/22/05 Fri

A few things. -- Shanola, 19:20:39 04/29/05 Fri

Re: A few things. -- Diane, 20:09:27 04/29/05 Fri

Okay - Chapter 6 - Alternate Version -- Diane, 11:07:29 04/30/05 Sat

Okay - Chapter 7 -- Diane, 18:02:05 04/22/05 Fri
Okay - Chapter 8 -- Diane, 18:15:47 04/22/05 Fri

Re: Okay - Chapter 8 -- Shanola, 19:26:32 04/29/05 Fri

Re: Okay - Chapter 8 -- Diane, 20:11:57 04/29/05 Fri

Okay - Chapter 8 - Altered Version -- Diane, 11:22:46 04/30/05 Sat

Okay - Chapter 9 -- Diane, 18:26:29 04/22/05 Fri

Re: Okay - Chapter 9 -- Shanola, 19:31:36 04/29/05 Fri

Re: Okay - Chapter 9 -- Diane, 20:18:33 04/29/05 Fri

Hey, Diane. -- Shanola, 17:50:21 05/01/05 Sun

That's cool! -- Diane, 18:57:26 05/01/05 Sun

Okay - Chapter 10 -- Diane, 20:28:39 04/29/05 Fri
Okay - Chapter 11 -- Diane, 20:38:14 04/29/05 Fri

Okay - Chapter 11 Read this one, please -- Diane, 20:41:27 04/29/05 Fri

Re: Okay - Chapter 11 Read this one, please -- Shanola, 18:33:12 05/18/05 Wed

Re: Okay - Chapter 11 Read this one, please -- Diane, 18:56:02 05/19/05 Thu

Re: Okay - Chapter 11 Read this one, please -- Shanola, 18:14:26 05/20/05 Fri

Okay - Chapter 12 -- Diane, 20:56:11 04/29/05 Fri

Re: Okay - Chapter 12 -- Shanola, 18:49:49 05/18/05 Wed

Re: Okay - Chapter 12 -- Diane, 18:50:53 05/19/05 Thu

Re: Okay - Chapter 12 -- Shanola, 18:30:12 05/20/05 Fri

You've given me some good ideas -- Diane, 19:12:11 05/20/05 Fri

Okay - Chapter 12 - Rewrite -- Diane, 11:26:50 05/22/05 Sun

Okay - Chapter 13 -- Diane, 21:04:19 04/29/05 Fri
Okay - Chapter 14 -- Diane, 21:13:02 04/29/05 Fri
Okay - Chapter 15 -- Diane, 21:19:57 04/29/05 Fri
By the way -- Diane, 19:00:55 05/19/05 Thu

Re: By the way -- Shanola, 18:16:15 06/01/05 Wed

Re: By the way -- Diane, 20:01:33 06/07/05 Tue

Rewrite of Chapter 3 -- Diane, 11:27:47 06/04/05 Sat

Re: Rewrite of Chapter 3 -- Shanola, 18:22:37 06/23/05 Thu

Re: Rewrite of Chapter 3 -- Diane, 16:48:35 07/01/05 Fri

hello -- ekim, 03:25:19 04/13/05 Wed
I am writing a new story and would like some honest feedback. Hope someone has the time read it and give me some suggestions.

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chapter 1 -- ekim, 03:26:25 04/13/05 Wed

Re: chapter 1 -- signme1, 07:49:33 04/15/05 Fri
would you -- elder, 04:17:37 09/05/05 Mon

Re: would you -- ekim, 05:36:26 11/04/05 Fri

Valentine Challenge Story -- Nell, 09:12:32 01/06/05 Thu
In my slow approach to archiving my past work, I keep thinking that I will just edit/revise this, my very first ever posted LFN fic, one more time before I hit 'send.'

Okay - so, the story first went up in, oh, around 2001? But - who is in a hurry?

This was written in reponse to a fic challenge from Jean, to write a story for Valentine's day - however you wanted to.

I put the challenge together with something I'd been thinking about, and this is what came out.

Whatever concrit shows up here, I will respond to in one way or another - and then, yes, I will send this off to Ranma.

Thanks ahead of time,

Nell

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Valentine Challenge Story 1/1 -- Nell, 09:13:43 01/06/05 Thu

Re: Valentine Challenge Story 1/1 -- sk, 09:53:49 01/06/05 Thu

Thanks - I will look forward to it. (r) -- Nell, 05:24:59 01/07/05 Fri

Nell....(r) -- Mary, 16:23:31 01/06/05 Thu

The only thing that makes you a beta reader is willingness to beta! -- Nell, 05:28:31 01/07/05 Fri

You're brave, brave woman...(r) -- Swatkat, 01:04:03 01/07/05 Fri

Well, I like to think of it more as putting my money where my mouth is. (r) -- Nell, 05:30:54 01/07/05 Fri

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