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Date Posted: 20:31:36 04/29/05 Fri
Author: Shanola
Subject: Re: Okay - Chapter 9
In reply to: Diane 's message, "Okay - Chapter 9" on 19:26:29 04/22/05 Fri

I'm not sure I can comment on the chapters you've got about Michael and Adam. You've painted them in a way that is very foreign to me. I think I shall refrain from commenting on those chapters, until I know more about where the story is headed.

Do you have the rest finished?

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[> [> [> Re: Okay - Chapter 9 -- Diane, 21:18:33 04/29/05 Fri

I'm still writing, but I can post the next few chapters.

Re Adam: We never really saw him after age four, and only knew that he was a precocious, happy kid who loved his dad. The Michael I'm wtiting in the beginning is more like the one Adam would have known as Daddy, not the Section Michael.

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[> [> [> [> Hey, Diane. -- Shanola, 18:50:21 05/01/05 Sun

I'm heading out of town this weekend. I don't know that I'll be able to beta read until after I get back! I'm sorry. I'm just really pressed for time!

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[> [> [> [> [> That's cool! -- Diane, 19:57:26 05/01/05 Sun

Whenever it's convenient for you. I'll be here, :)

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