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Date Posted: 19:33:12 05/18/05 Wed
Author: Shanola
Subject: Re: Okay - Chapter 11 Read this one, please
In reply to: Diane 's message, "Okay - Chapter 11 Read this one, please" on 21:41:27 04/29/05 Fri

Only one thing.

Adam doesn't know what a fever is but he has no problem with the word 'rectum'? I found that hard to believe. Plus, most kids who are school age have been sick a few times and have had their temps taken by Mom. Why wouldn't Adam know what a fever was?

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[> [> [> [> Re: Okay - Chapter 11 Read this one, please -- Diane, 19:56:02 05/19/05 Thu

Adam doesn't know what a fever is but he has no problem with the word 'rectum'? I found that hard to believe. Plus, most kids who are school age have been sick a few times and have had their temps taken by Mom. Why wouldn't Adam know what a fever was?

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I can leave out 'rectum.'
I didn't know what a fever was until middle school--my mom always (incorrectly) called it a 'temperature.' But I see your point. Would the scene lose any of its cuteness if I took that bit out?

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[> [> [> [> [> Re: Okay - Chapter 11 Read this one, please -- Shanola, 19:14:26 05/20/05 Fri

No, I don't think it would lose anything by taking it out.

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