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Date Posted: 16:40:44 03/27/01 Tue
Author: james
Subject: The characterisation in this is excellent. You make it so easy to picture them and your reasoning behind Victors actions makes him all the more interesting. He seems a little condemned as a person towards the end. I dont think that the language is too overly complicated, I think it adds to the tone of the characters.
In reply to: luke 's message, "trying to be a bit like Thomas Hardy" on 17:25:52 03/20/01 Tue


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[> from what i remember reading of Thomas Hardy this is really quite like it. i dont like the final paragraph though but i dont think i have any real reasons behind it. i like the first couple of lines especially and i love the way the father is dealt with. -- zeina, 11:44:11 04/07/01 Sat

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