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Date Posted: 17:34:51 04/01/01 Sun
Author: luke
Subject: So has she been to the beach then to the pool and now back to the beach then? The still atmosphere on the beach is captured by the slow movement verbs like, bob, gently slope, saunter, moves methodically.
In reply to: si 's message, "she needs a 'had been' after 'the light' in the last sentence, that's all. why do you like the first paragraph? just saying you like it isn't specific enough to be of real help." on 11:55:01 04/01/01 Sun


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[> [> [> [> that's better. but no, she didn't go back to the beach, unless her grammar really /has/ fallen apart - that's why i say 'had been' is missing after 'the light'... -- si, 12:15:49 04/02/01 Mon

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