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Re: Okay

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Darkfire75

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Date Posted: 12:12:43 05/30/02 Thu
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In reply to: BlackDino73 's message, "Re: I'm writing another poem..." on 07:58:09 05/30/02 Thu

Okay. This poem (please note) was created in a few minutes during the beginning of a class. I hope you enjoy it.

"I Feel Whole"

Rain pours down on my soul,
no matter what I do, I am never whole.
The sun has disappeared behind the clouds,
but I can hear the voice of God out loud.

I feel my heart ache to see you,
to know what it means to be true.
Tears drain my sorrows,
as a river follows.

A light is in your eyes,
when I look at the sky.
I see a rainbow shine in you,
the sky is so blue.

My knees are weak,
and my knowledge is meek.
Your voice is warm and tender,
as I look at your splender.

Tell me you love me,
you know that's what you want.
If you say those words,
then I will feel whole once more...

by Darkfire75

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Subject	Author	Date
Re: Okay	BlackDino73	08:06:26 05/31/02 Fri
Re: Okay -- Darkfire75, 15:38:52 05/31/02 Fri