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Date Posted: 04:59:21 03/05/01 Mon
Author: Elric
Author Host/IP: ip8.hutchison.ks.pub-ip.psi.net / 38.27.1.8
Subject: Okay...
In reply to: Phoenix The Rebirth A.K.A. Selphilover 's message, "YYYYYYYIIIIIPPPPPPPPPPEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!" on 19:02:57 03/04/01 Sun

The thing is, I've been writing a few scenes that I'm not sure I want ot leave in teh final thing. And on top of that, I only have about 14 pages written, and the estimate for the final thing is about 50 pages, plus I won't be able to introduce you until about page forty, if I can do it at all. I't just the way the story is coming along, and I'm not sure a phoenix fits into the plot very well. The original concept was for the character to be the king of the celestial, which are the opposite of deoms and devils. But, this would mean the character would have enough power (if you will pardon my french) to totally fuck up the rest of the story, so that's pretty unlikely. The other thing I've come up with is for him to be a seer or a mystic. This means I would be able to introduce the character earlier, but the name would have to be different, and he would have less of a direct hand in the story, though he would still be important. Anyway, I prefer the seer thing to the king of the celestials, because it would bea easier to write. Not just to write realistically, but easier to write period. Plus, you would be introduced sooner. Anyway, let me know what you think.

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[> Okay... -- Elric, 04:59:22 03/05/01 Mon (ip8.hutchison.ks.pub-ip.psi.net/38.27.1.8)

The thing is, I've been writing a few scenes that I'm not sure I want ot leave in teh final thing. And on top of that, I only have about 14 pages written, and the estimate for the final thing is about 50 pages, plus I won't be able to introduce you until about page forty, if I can do it at all. I't just the way the story is coming along, and I'm not sure a phoenix fits into the plot very well. The original concept was for the character to be the king of the celestial, which are the opposite of deoms and devils. But, this would mean the character would have enough power (if you will pardon my french) to totally fuck up the rest of the story, so that's pretty unlikely. The other thing I've come up with is for him to be a seer or a mystic. This means I would be able to introduce the character earlier, but the name would have to be different, and he would have less of a direct hand in the story, though he would still be important. Anyway, I prefer the seer thing to the king of the celestials, because it would bea easier to write. Not just to write realistically, but easier to write period. Plus, you would be introduced sooner. Anyway, let me know what you think.


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