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Author: Alvin |
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Date Posted: 05:51:38 02/22/05 Tue In reply to: Theresa 's message, "Re: Poetry" on 02:52:18 02/22/05 Tue Dear Theresa, I took out the "thee" because I thought it clashed with the "you" in the next line. I changed the "spirit" to "soul" to denote a complimentary part of the twin soul. I made the reference on union again with "We" and "in spirit" so as to denote the energy combination in the spiritial realm. Those were what I considered for the changes. Here's a concocted healing spell for your TS's cousin:- Hi, carcinoma in my guts Appeased be you, don't drive me nuts Keep your growth in self-control Let's make peace and keep me whole Hi, benign tumor in my liver What surprise you did deliver Please be kind and go to sleep Your host would like her health to keep Cancers, tumors, pains and all... Discomforts now will not befall Every day is wonderful I'd love to see a life so full Giving thanks to Great Divine I'll get to see Thy Grace so kind Why, this is such blessing fine... To live and know my stars shall shine! So mote it be! :) With blessings, Alvin [ Next Thread | Previous Thread | Next Message | Previous Message ] |
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| Re: Poetry | Alvin | 06:15:57 02/22/05 Tue |
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| Re: Poetry | Theresa | 22:01:28 02/23/05 Wed |
| Re: Poetry | Denise | 18:56:06 03/07/05 Mon |