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Date Posted: 22:31:52 01/08/02 Tue
Author: BlazinDays
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Return to a Wedding - Chapter 1

First of all, this is my very first fanfic! Please I need some feedback! What do you think, and please let me know if I'm taking this too slow(I think that would be my problem with fics LOL) or anything else. Just be gentle ;) Thanks!

It was a beautiful spring day. Carrie stepped out of the Taxi, she was looking up at Saint Lukes Church. "I can't believe you let her take it this far" she replied under her breath. She slowly walked up the path and into the church looking around. It was only 9:00 in the morning, so noone was here yet exept the florists and decorators they wouldn't recognize her. She flashed back to hers and Austins wedding, then remembering what Mike had done. As she thought of Mike it brought a smile to her face, "I miss you and love you so much Michael" she whispered as her eyes watered up, but she wouldn't let herself cry. She quickly turned around and walked back to the cab. "Salem Inn Please" she quietly told the cab driver. "Sure thing Miss" The cab driver friendly replied. Carrie sighed and looked out the window. ~I Just need a shower and a long sleep that flight wiped me out. Then I'll be ready to face everyone~ Carrie thought.

Sami looked up in the mirror, "I LOOK GREAT" she proudly said aloud, "This wedding is going to be the best of all time, especially outdoing My sister's lame wedding, stealing the groom" she replied rolling her eyes. ~Austin loved me and only me, Nicole better not try anything I know she's been up to something~ She thought to herself tossing her hair over her shoulder. Suddenly she heard a knock at the door, "Come in" Sami replied sweetly. "NICOLE! What are you doing here. Austin may have invited you but that doesn't mean I want you here annoying me. I certainly don't want your makeup tips" She spat. "Now now Sami, you shouldn't be rude to your guests ESPECIALLY ME" she winked, " I just came to wish you well" Nicole smirked as she turned around and walked out. ~As if I'm really going to believe that, what are you up to NIKKI~ She thought glaring at the door. "Oh well there's nothing you can do AUSTIN is mine, and in a few hours it'll be legal" Sami laughed as she touched up her makeup.

Carrie stepped out of the elevator carrying her new dress in hand and walked to the end of the hall to her room. She quickly did her makeup and had her black spagetti strap dress on, "Hmmm I do look dang good If I say so myself" She smiled, "Well sister dear hope you'll be happy to see me" she smirked as she left the hotel room.

St. Lukes was quickly filling up, John, Roman, Austin and Will were all outside of the main entrace greeting everyone. "Listen man, I don't want to bring up a sore subject but what about Carrie" John asked "Does she know whats going on?" "John I phoned her, and I got no answer, I did leave a message for her though. Maybe her and Mike went away." Roman answered, "Although, I do wish she could be here." Austin just glanced over with a strange look in his eyes, refusing to comment on the mention of Carrie. "Sorry Austin, but she is Sami's sister and your ex-wife. You can't avoid her forever." Roman stated. "I know Roman. Believe me I know." Austin answered.

Everyone was inside waiting for the arrival of Sami just engaging themselves in small conversation. Nicole was sitting in the back row with a big smirk on her face.~ what is taking you so long?Maybe I should have brought you here myself~ Nicole thought to herself. Austin was standing where he should be when he suddenly started intently staring at the entrance of Saint Lukes. "Austin? Austin? Whats wrong?" John and Phillip relied, then the followed his gaze at which the found Carrie standing at the entrace. "Carrie...." Austin whispered as he began walking down the isle towards her.

TBC.....

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Re: Return to a Wedding -- IMAN, 19:57:37 01/09/02 Wed
- Re: Return to a Wedding -- BlazinDays, 00:53:08 01/10/02 Thu