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Date Posted: 18:36:24 10/26/00 Thu
Author: Hunii Luv
Subject: My Poems: Tell me what you think PLEASE!!!

I love to write poetry and lyrics...here are just some of my work:

BODILY FUNCTIONS!

My bodily functions,
May be used to lure you,
My mind,
Can scheme of ways to get near you,
My eyes,
They talk to you,
Tell you,
I want you, My voice,
Speaks to you,
With feelings I�ve never felt before,
My body,
It will seduce you,
Pleasure you in many ways,
My heart,
Will tell you my secrets,
Secrets untold,
Only you will know,
And you alone,
You can�t run,
And do not hide,
I Will follow you,
Find you,
And capture you,
But my body is not a tool,
It was not made,
To be used and thrown away,
You treat me right,
And I will do you the same.

BROKEN HEARTED!

I didn�t see the pain,
Like a snake,
It wrapped its body,
All around me,
But I still could not see it,
I didn�t see my tears,
Even though I did not cry,
They fell, Invisible for the eye to see,
I�ve never seen the sky so grey,
It rains in my heart,
Almost everyday,
No more sun,
No more stars,
Every word I say,
Gathers no meaning,
My emotions,
My feelings, Tangled,
Entwined together,
Senseless,
For no one can understand what it means,
Except me,
I�ve tripped,
And shattered into many pieces,
Only the keeper of my heart,
Is able to put me back together,
But the scars,
That bear within me,
Can never be healed,
You broke my heart once,
You will never to it again.

WILD HEART!

My heart,
Danced like a wild animal,
With your love,
You tamed it,
You tamed me,
Taught me how to love,
You lit a candle,
And it still burns within me,
Like a flower,
I bloomed,
Like the sun,
You gave me love,
To help me grow,
And I grew

LIFE!

Time goes by so fast,
In the blink of an eye,
Your whole life runs by,
Answers to questions you shall find,
Hidden amongst the walls of life,
Questions you want answered,
As it says,
Seek and you shall find,
Knock and the door shall be opened unto you,
There are many songs to sing,
And stories to write,
Life is one big story,
And we are it�s story tellers,
The world is one big play,
And we, It�s characters,
The essence of life,
Is in the palm of your hand,
Your destiny,
Is what you make it out to be,
The experiences we treasure most,
Are the simple pleasures we get out of life,
Love,
Happiness,
Is what we all search for,
It is no complicated matter,
It is we who make it difficult,
When love is not difficult at all,
Life is made up of many different roads,
Leading us to our main purpose,
Whether you go left or right,
Is your decision,
And your decision only,
Whether you get there,
Is up to you,
You see through your eyes,
The beauty of life.

CAPTURED!

It melted in my mouth
And burned in my heart
Smeared across my lips
One taste
And I was addicted
It passed under my skin
And crawled it�s way into my body
This cool sensation
Made me burn with passion
For something I have never had
Have never felt
It wrote whatever you will see in my eyes
It spoke whatever you will hear in my voice
Like it melted in my heart
You melted in the same way
Devouring me whole
I am yours eternally

EMPTY BUT ALIVE!

You better watch your step
Jump across the portholes
You can sink
Into deep emptiness
A world full of pitch-blackness
Where you feel you�re nobody
And nobody is your friend

I know that feeling
Where everything you thought counted
Ends up not counting at all
Putting all your energy
In something not worth while
But seemed to matter at the time
You world crumbled
To little pieces
Breaking loose one at a time
Sinking to deep waters
Never to be found again

It feels as though your life ends
When in the split second
You can come alive again
A deep thought
Can trigger the soul
Awaken the songs you sang
So when you feel
It don�t matter
Hold on to you
And everything will be
Just as you left it
Where you least expect it
Where it�s always been

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Some more? -- Sea nymph, 22:02:04 10/26/00 Thu