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Subject: Mr Black

Author:
Jason
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Date Posted: 23:13:21 02/19/06 Sun

Hey I read your Mr. Black story and I think it was fantastic. However one thing really bugged me, no one seemed to care that Brian had been kidnapped and raped. When he told his mother that detail she barely blinked. Other than that I think it was a great story.

I really wish you would write a whole arc about the guy who kidnapped him. I can see why you didnt resolve that in the story, but I think you should consider something with that guy.

I stayed up an extra hour to read all of the chapters of part 1.....its bed time now....I look forward to reading all of your other stories even if they were half as good.....JUSTICE MAN!!!!! You cant end a story without the bad guy getting his just deserts.....everything else resolved so nicely in part 1.........sigh............

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