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Date Posted: 04:13:45 02/05/05 Sat
Author: daniel sears
Subject: and.....a story!
In reply to: daniel sears 's message, "Re: i might enter that" on 04:11:04 02/05/05 Sat

>>>
>>>Dear God...
>>>
>>>I know you're watching over me
>>>And I'm feeling truly blest
>>>For no matter what I pray for
>>>You always know what's best!
>>>
>>>I have this circle of E-mail friends,
>>>Who mean the world to me;
>>>Some days I "send" and "send,"
>>>At other times, I let them be.
>>>
>>>I am so blessed to have these friends,
>>>With whom I've grown so close;
>>>So this little poem I dedicate to them,
>>>Because to me they are the "Most"!
>>>
>>>When I see each name download,
>>>And view the message they've sent;
>>>I know they've thought of me that day,
>>>And "well wishes" were their intent.
>>>
>>>So to you, my friends, I would like to say,
>>>Thank you for being a part;
>>>Of all my daily contacts,
>>>This comes right from my heart.
>>>
>>>God bless you all is my prayer today,
>>>I'm honored to call you "friend";
>>>I pray the Lord will keep you safe,
>>>Until we write again.
>>in our college poetry contest!
>>
>>what do ya think of that?
>it's posted for me on another board!
Daniel sears jungle jerney

introduction

It was a while since daniel’s last trip and he really wanted to get going again on holiday.

Luckily he got a call from nadia

“we’re going to Africa!” “wanna come?”

daniel said he would come.

he started packing again. Gosh…his second holiday in the space of months

This time he was flying on dwaggie airlines a new air service.

daniel had to meet him at waterfall city!

“welcome to dwaggie airlines”

dwaggie airlines was cool! Daniel never been on such a good airline

even his last trip on britania wasn’t that good!

Soon we were there. he was met at the African airport by nadia and off he went to the jungle tent.

Yes daniel were staying out side! It wasn’t really to his liking.

When he went to the far of island he had to stay in a tent and he and lianne hated it.

Not to mention the cave

he was staying for 14 days so here goes

Day 1:Monday January the 1st 2004

Today was his first full day in Africa. he was busy meeting all the natives. There was this girl called stormy who he really liked.

She said that she had come from dinotopia and that she had brort some of her frends with her. She introduced daniel to vira and dwaggie the owner of dwaggie airlines.

After a breef introduction stormy took him out on saffary for the first time

“wanna go on saffary?” said stormy

“yes I’d love it!” said daniel

“come with me and I’ll take you” said stormy

Daniel took stormy’s hand and they went to saffary


“this is saffary” announced stormy “what do you think?”

“you’ve been here before?” asked dan “you seem to know it all!”

“yes I have I love saffary!” said stormy

“it’s my first time on saffary and I think it’s cool!” Daniel was really pleased that stormy had taken him on saffarry.


he didon’t know howlong we spent at the saffarry but a long tine*


*back at camp vira is preparing lunch*

*skips mererly passed vira and joins stormy in her tent*

“so it was cool hah?” questions stormy

“yey…it was grate” said daniel

Daniel feels hungry so goes to find vira*

*stormy stays in tent and thinks about the day*

mean while vira wonders about what to make*

*does nothing caus she has no idea what to eat in the jungle*

“what should I have?”

zzzzzzzzzzzzz!a fly…yuck!

*vira points at the fly*

“shoooioiooioioioi!

*ah…fly in her mouth*


dwaggie gets ready for another flight*

“come on?” he said

*feeling chalinged dwaggie wishis he could come to Africa*

*just then

“I’m looking for the way to Africa”

“who are you?”

“count olaf”

“I don’t think I know you!”

“doubt it. I need to find Daniel and all that lot”

“are you sure you’re not playing games with me?”

“nope there exspecting me”

“I’m sure we can get you there just wait and I’ll take you to the jungle”

meanwhile stormy just got a message on her mobile

“hi stormy
this is dwaggie

I’m bringing count olaf to the jungle

Be waiting to meet him at the airport exit

Regards

Dwaggie”

*shows no interest in the message and deletes it

*does not do any thing else*


vira is struggling to get fly out of her mouth

“go…a…way you retched fly!”

*fly eventually goes and she is stuck once again wondering what to make*


Daniel is getting ready for dinner finds extra food and brings to the cooking clearing

“vira?”

*vira nods at dan and asks what he’s brort

“oh…sausages! I’ve made a fire not far from here and we can cook them”

*vira snatches the bangers and starts putting them on the fire mean while Daniel waits in the back ground looking up at the flames

“why are you not helping me with the food?”

“I’m just looking around the jungle”

“I thort you did that this morning?”

“yes I did but I’m doing it again”

“where’s stormy?”

“oh! She’s in a tent at the other end of the jungle”

“cool! What’s she doing?”

“dunno”

“well can we go and look for her”

“I’ll go vira you need to stay here and look after the food”

“rite o I’ll stay here while you find stormy”

*dan goes of vira stays and watches the food

later

“food’s ready”

“the sausages are done already?”

“yey I’m starving!

“okay where will we eat?”

“first night so let’s eat here”

*sure enugh all of them sat down and ate there meal

“gosh…I’m tired”

“me as well how about you vira?”

“oh no! I’m going to exsplore the tunnels and caves that are around here”

“oh can’t we wait till Tuesday?”

“I’ll go now and if it’s safe we can all go”

*every one except vira goes to bed


*it’s getting dark in Africa. Stormy and Daniel are already in bed but not vira*

*she hurries along the jungle path to see what she can find*

“owowow!”

*she bangs her head on some thing.

*she nurses her head painfully

“ouch”she exclaimed to her self

*soon she came to a rocky cliff

down she went not thinking about where it would lead all she knew…she was lost!

Day 2 Tuesday the 2nd of January


*morning sun streams in

“howdy stormy”

“hi dan!”

“should we go and wake vira?”

“no she’ll get up when she’s ready we don’t want to disturb her”

“well what shill we do?”

“let’s go exsploring. Remember all those caves and tunnels?”

*Daniel shakes his head

“better not we’re wait for vira’s feedback and then decide”

“okay…cool”

“storm?”

“yes”

“got any choccy?”

“of corse why?”

“oh I’m starving! Last night I had far to little”

*Daniel and storm share some choccy

“there Daniel. Feel better now?”

“sure storm much better for a real snack”

“thank goodness for that”

“you can say that again”

*storm puts the choccy away

“ison’t boring out here in Africa”

“it certainly is”

“there’s nothing to do.”


“welcome to the jungle is it?” asked olaf

#”don’t be horrible olaf! You know we’re all scared” said vira

*olaf gives a nasty smile

“rosa didon’t see you here! What brings you to the far reaching of Africa”

“olaf brort us here!” said rosa Vira how did you get here”

“oh I flew! Dwaggie airlines…it’s really cool!”

“it is?”
“yep it’s one of the best”

“talking of dwaggie where is he!”


“don’t know. Listen olaf really got us in to this. We need to get back up to storm and Daniel”

“so you can get back to storm and Daniel”

“yey…we’re get back some how”

“I’m goona stop you! I brort you here and I’m gonna make sure you’re all never see storm and Daniel again”

“you mean pig! We have a rite”

“you do? Sorry…it slipped my mind!”

*ferce laugh from olaf

“why did you bring us here?”

“caus…o..just for fun I suppose! Perhaps I should bring the others down”

“you can’t. you don’t know where they are”

“no but I can find them as easy as boarding a plane”

*small smiles over the joke*

*it’s now mid day. Stormy and Daniel are getting really worrid about vira. She hasn’t turned up

“I think we should try the tent now!”

“yes okay I’ll go!”

(*comes back

“she’s not there”

“any note?”

“nope”


“settled we won’t go exsploring”

“but we need to…”

*intruption by clap of thunda

“better go”

“where?”

“just come on in the tent”

“that’s not gona….”

*another loud clap of thunda

“this is it. We’re done for!

“come on storm we’ve got to find vira”

“okay okay we’ll find her if it takes all day! But…where to start!

“the jungle path”

“caus of the caves?”

“exactly now come on!

*times ticking on. It’s now 4.00 on the second day*

“oh please leave us alone you horid man”

“no! you have to understand I want to take you all back the usa and keep you hostage”

*camela starts to cry vira tries to hold her down but it’s no use rosa and roweta just gaze on&*

“hah vira it’s not…fair. 2 of the.frends are up there and we reach the jungle cavern”…hah”

“it’s okay camela! We’ll get them back some time even if we have to stay longer”

*rosa gets up and walks over to where vira and camela are*

“listen the people at the top are lost and we’re lost at the same time”

“so it is equal?” said camela

“exactly! If only there was a way”

*they all sit down and think

*stormy and Daniel had eventually decided to walk along the jungle path. They thort it might lead them to vira but what they didon’t know was about others. Count olaf had told the others about the captives at the top but it seemed Daniel and stormy were in the dark

“gosh. We’ve been walking so long”

“yes I’m getting very tired now surely we’re near a resting place!”

“I don’t think so! At least not for a while yet”

“we’ve got to get there soon”

*they both reach a cliff

“you go down the cliff”

“let’s rest”

“rite! Anyway…it’s krist knows what time”

part 2 coming!

Day 3:

“gosh…..do you think Daniel and stormy are okay up there with out us?”

“rosa…..don’t worry! There fine at least…..i hope!” camela tried to asure her

“well you’ve hoped too far” said olaf

*olaf storms in to the room

“you are all here till furver notice”

“what ever olaf! We don’t have to do what you say!

“oh no?”

“try us!”

“okay….here goes!”

*olaf laughts and then goes to get a gun

*it’s sunny in the clearing*

“storm?”

“yeh?”

“I’m starting to get worried! I don’t know some of the people down there but rosa and vira”

“stop it! I have an idea”

“what’s that?”

“we can find dwaggie and he can help us”

“but isn’t he down there to?”

“don’t think so! I think he can help us for sure!”

“and just exactly how sure are you?”

“dwaggie airlines”

“dwaggie airlines?”

“well he can fly down in the plane and then every one can get on bored!

“but what about olaf?”

“like he’s going to get on! Dwaggie’s that sort of person who protects his frends not hurt them!”

“I suppose you’re rite”

“come on let’s go!

“and now I pronounce the death ofum…who first……ah…rosa what about you!”

“no way! You’ll have to go home and get kestrel first! I’m not leaving with out my sister!”

“oh that’s the girl who comes on the dragons lair isn’t it?”

“yes she doesn’t want to be caught”

“what’s going on ey?”

“leave out of this dwaggie this is me and rosa 1 on 1”

*the others waiting get nervers vira longs to just carry the others to safety

“now I will tell you once more! If you…..”

*olaf falls and splashes every one on the service. Dwaggie has an idea*

“wait here! I’ll quickly go back to where dwaggie airlines is and we can fly to the top”

“wow that’s so cool I’ve been longing to get back!”

“well now nothing will stop us will it”

*soon the airlines are ready and each person climbs in one by one

back at the jungle path Daniel and stormy are getting tired.

“honestly why are people so naughty? All my friends are down there!”

“you only know one and that’s not exactly magic is it!”

“gues it’s not!”

back by the river rosa is struggling to get in to the plain. Meanwhile the others are safely in the plain.

“hurry up get in the plain” said dwaggie

“I can’t get in”said rosa

“hang on……I’ll come down and help you!”

rosa was thrilled. While vira camela and Roweta were all ready in the plain

“hey vira..sit in the plain”

rosa managed to get 8in

“and now”announced dwaggie “we’re going on dwaggie airlines”

so picture! We’ve got 2 dinotopians scared stiff an Roweta and an ongoing rendition of no me creo nada (a east African song)

“can you all just shut up!”said rosa “count olaf…”

to late. Just then olaf managed to reach the plain

“I will know fly with you and um….”

Suddenly ythe plain fell backwoards and every one fell in the water!

Unfortunately vira and rosa got in to a bit of an argument and started trying to drown each other and then…

Rosa drowned

“rosa?”asked dwaggie

no anser. The water remained silent and still dwaggie was getting increaseingly worried about rosa so he decided that vira should take her to sure

“hurry up hurry up”said dwaggie “yo 2” he points to the other 2 dinotopians (camela and roweta)”hurry up we’re going!”

dwaggie pulls every one to safety and starts the engine of the airline once more!

“rosa’s dead”announced dwaggie “why bovver putting her back in the plain”

every one looks shocked.

Meanwhile rain is falling on the jungle path. Stormy and Daniel find a shelter just near the elephant’s

“well here it is”said Daniel”hey storm lend me the choccy”

storm looks in her pockets for the choccy.

But for some reason it’s not there! She starts hunting every where

“it must have fallen out on the jungle path”storm said “it must have”

Daniel looked out the window the rain was hard against the sill and the path looked black and forbidding

“we can’t go now”Daniel said “we have to stay here!”

stormy agried. They decided they would and wait for the rain to stop.

All this rain also meant problems at the other end. Dwaggie was relying on the slippery ground to take off.

“oh bovver! Why does it have to rain and spoil our escape plan”dwaggie said

suddenly the sky grows even darker. A storm starts and it seems the whole jungle is lit up with messages saying things like “go back” and “not this way”

night falls. The storm is still at it’s full force destroying every thing and every one face to face. ]you could be on dwaggie airlines or yoyu could be with Daniel and stormy in the shelter but nothing could keep you away from the storm.

Day 4

Stormy woke up to a fairly cloudy day. Apparently they had slept all night in the little shelter and were now ready to continue there quest!

None of the choccy had been found so it looked like there would be no food for a while.

They both left the little shelter and decided on the pathway leading to the rite. Little did they know that around the next corner lived a scary man. A very scary man who storm and Daniel would learn to fear greatly

Hardkick was his name. he lived with his mum kiva and his sister amber. His dad Stephan was away at the moment doing important work at a far of place known as the outer island.

They came on the door

“any one in there?”storm asked

the door opened and some one came out

“I am hardkick”said hardkick “why are you here?”

“we have some people down at the jungle!”said Daniel “rosa dwaggie and every other person who lives in a square mile of here!”

“okay!”said hardkick “I’ll join you on this quest and we’ll see what we can do”

meanwhile dwaggie had almost givin up on the airlines they had figured that rosa was not dead at all. She had just been shocked by the water.

“come on every one”said dwaggie”it looks like we’ll have to swim for it!”

“no way!”said roweta “i no swim!

“I think it’s a good idea”said rosa “now come on! Dwaggie…..lift us in”

back on the jungle path storm Daniel and hardkick were all walking along the path. Daniel and storm never did get a chance to see hardkick’s family but hardkick did say that perhaps when every one is saved he would take them back.

“so where do we go now!”asked hardkick

“I don’t really know”said storm !”surely they can’t be far”

soon the came to a huge gate

“oh dear…should we go through the gate?” said dan

“I think not! My name is chad and I warn you this gate will lead you to nothing but doom”

meanwhile back at the jungle dwaggie was slowly but surely getting every one to swim. The latist development was the fact that rosa was afraid of the water. Even though some of her friends were there she didn’t really fancy swimming back to Daniel and stormy and anyway….she didn’t know where they were

fortunately that was about to change. As the day ended dwaggie and the others heard a scream

“what’s that?”asked rosa

“I havn’t a clue!”admitted dwaggie “but I’m sure we will find out!”

“let’s go”said vira “see what it is”

of vcorse it was the others. Some how they had come in to contact with a slope…a deep slope with not much escape. Daniel had found it. He and storm were going to go down while hardkick checked whever it was safe but hardkick wasn’t aware of how near they were and crash! They all fell down the slope

about 1 mile away chad was thinking about what he’d said. Really he thort I could at least help with the situation so he started back towards hardkick and the others.

Back at the jungle the clearing where every one had started was quiet. It seemed that dwaggie and the others had swam up towards the jungle path.

And it was true every was swimming up the streamy type thingy to the path

“isn’t the water cold?” said rosa

“yes it is”said dwaggie “but it’s our only escape plan!”

now it was about midnight on day 4 and it looked like it would be one busy night!

Day 5 was a raver poor effert from every one. No one even tried to rescue any one. Hardkick how ever! Was still worried as he didn’t know any thing on this until yesterday

For a few days all was normal and every one kind of slept whever it was in the pool or in the jungle path.

On day 8 how ever! Dwaggie noticed that they were swimming in to sharkies

(the following quote to avoid the language that dwaggie used)

“oh no! can’t beeleve this! Sharks”

“I’m sure they won’t get us”said rosa “we’re doing well in finding each other”

“sure are”said dwaggie “let’s hope we’re okay”

some one else who was having problems was chad. He was meant to stay at the gates but after deciding that it was best to help hardkick’s lot he had left the gate and now any one could walk in.

sure enough while chad was talking to hardkick the gate began to swing open and in walked the count

“so! How’s it all going!”he said

“we’ve got help from hardkick”storm said “he’s helping us track down the others”

“is he really! Oh I’d love to see him try! Where are the others?”


“how are we meant to know”said Daniel”could be any where!”

every one watched as the count reached in to his bag and pulled out some choccy

“any one fancy some choccy?”

“yes please!”said Daniel “I love choccy!”

“don’t take it!”said storm “it looks dangours”

“what’s so dangerous about choccy?” Daniel asked “I think it will be alrite” and he reached out to grab the choccy!

Back at the river dwaggie was really looking forward to returning to the top!

“we’ve still got a long way to go”he said “any way camela you have been quiet every thing okay?”
“it is all well!” said camela “getting bored here now!”

“all this?”asked rosa

“you know”said camela “for the last I don’t know how many days we’ve just waited and waited”

that is why I didn’t go in to account of day 6 and 7. firstly nothing happened and next it would be pointless unless you like reading stories that send you to sleep or some thing

back at the path Daniel had eaten the whole bar of choccy! He was starting to feel really ill!

Just then daniel felt a tap on his shoulder and turned around!

“daniel it’s lianne! Remember when we were cast away on that island…..”

“yes”said Daniel “but where did you come from”

“well marma duke utoraptor met me and apparently she knew you were here”

even storm was puzzled. Hardkick just looked on!

“carl told her!”

“any way I know where they all are! I’ve got a map!”

meanwhile at the jungle airport nadia had heard of the news. She had been waiting at the airport as a backup and now she was flying back to England with…she hoped every one

dwaggie how ever was having more problems! Camela had been grabbed by one of the sharks what she was about to descover was that sharks were leathal!

Time moved on slowly but surely the sharks kept on coming camela kept on complaining and as for rosa vira and roweta they were talking about other plans!

“next month”rosa was saying “I’m going with angela haris who used to be a member of hour community college and we’re going on a diving trip”

“wow how boring!”vira said “I don’t think I’d like that! Anyway marian’s taking me fishing””

“cool!”said rosa “I’ve always wanted to go fishing is it near here?”

“no!”said vira “it’s just of factory tour 4d gosh….that place is magical as well!”

“it is?”said rosa

“yes! One day I’ll take you there!”

camela meanwhile could hear friendly laughter coming up from the water

“hey all of you”she said”take a look”

they had swam through chad’s gate with out knowing and now chad was angry!

“camela”called dwaggie”that’s not what you think!”

“it’s not?”she asked”where are we!”

“we went through chad’s gate”said dwaggie “oh dear we are in trouble!”

“no we’re not”shouted vira “we can’t be in trouble that bad”

“why’s that ey?”asked dwaggie

“because”said vira “we can just swim back you stupid fool”
camela stopped looking at the sure and swam quickly over to vira

“how dare you!”she said”speak to dwaggie the mayor of dinotopia like that!”

“the mayor of dinotopia?”vira asked

“I am!”admitted dwaggie “that’s why I run dwaggie airlines the fastest air service in the world!”

“a service that can’t even save us?” questioned camela

“well I mustt admit”said dwaggie”bad wever is not good for dragon flights!”

they all laughed!

Mean while back at the top hardkick had got a call

“gosh…”he said “that was amba on the phone! She wants me to come home now”

“she does?”said storm”you can’t help us any more?”

hardkick frouned

“no”he said “I must leave”

meanwhile the quietest girl in this story nadia was on her way to the police. She was going to capture count olaf

she arrived at the police station and told the police officer named stiletto about what had gone on. He said he would call his frend Christopher and he would drive up to where she said.

Soon the police were on the road. They had to appoint a new driver as Christopher could not drive they had this yong girl driver known as KREN. She was a very good driver and she could drive quite fast as well

And now for a bit about count olaf he had just got a phone call from esme sqola his girl frend to tell him that he was due home in a while. Elly count olaf’s sister was waiting for him so that the 3 could see elly in her school play.

“okay love I’ll be home in a moment!”he said!

It’s a waste of time going in to to much detail about the further events of day 8. 4every one kept on trying to save each other but what is about to happen will make your blood run cold!

Olaf was just returning home! On the way home he had noticed rosa was standing in the road!

“why ya standing in the road?”

“I”said KREN “happen to be a police officer you’re under arrest”

olaf grabed KREN pulled her aside made her sit down and strangled her. Olaf had no regrets as she died rite in front of his eyes!

Meanwhile there was a problem. Camela really wanted a drink and come to think of it so did dwaggie but as you know they were a long way yet from a tap.
So
It was decided that perhaps they would try and find some. Very…un,..wise!

Back at the top Daniel and stormy were getting increasingly tired.

“our holiday’s nearly over!”said storm “and we have found no one!”

I might as well skip here to the account of the final day.

Day 14 (forget the boring bits)

So…let me start again. Day 14 was a happy day for all. First count olaf was captured and taken to the outer island and secondly…

“gosh”said camela “we must be near……..”

“what?” said stormy “I’m sure I can hear….”

“camela”said Daniel and ran down to the lake. Rosa vira dwaggie roweta and camela were all there. Apparently chad and lianne had both helped them in there own ways. Chad by showing the way amd by lianne’s map

they were wet tired and smelt heavily of the sea.

“we’ve been doing a lot of swimming”groaned roweta “I can’t….”

“okay enough. Tell us when we’re back on the plain”said Daniel

“okay”said lianne”I’m taking them to my tent and while I’m there camela and dwaggie want a drink!”

“don’t we all”shouted vira and the went in the direction of the tent

now unless you are very interested in the drink it is no reason I should continue

but I’ll tell you this

soon nadia came.

scome you lot to the airport”she said

camela just sat there crying

vira went to see what was up

“what’s up?”she said tears filling her eyes as well “arm’t you happy to leave?”

camela did not move but she said

“vira…..i really like the jungle and um…..i’ve just felt at….home….here” and she started to weep uncontrollably

“camela”vira said sternly as she moved closer”you would think it’s our last holiday but…..come on let’s go back and look for next year!”

the force of vira’s words made camela move slowly towards the exit. To be honest our emotional girl of the story had really had enough

“we’re now going back”announced dwaggie as they boarded dwaggie airlines

but there was one girl our emotional friend who did not board. No she really wanted to stay in the jungle and she just wouldn’t board
1 hour later they had got her on board and the airlines were going!

With the African sun fading in the distamce emotions running high in every one and the prospect of returning to the outer island I guess I would not have liked to be on the plain at that time!

Back at waterfall city every one was silent. Once agin the holiday was over. It was really sad I know and even…it seemed the airport was crying to.

Every one went there own ways.

And as for camela she just left with dwaggie back to the outer island.

“why you coming with me?”he asked

“I will come and help you”said camela

“do what?”

camela laughed “help you stupid person! Dwaggie…..thanks for the jungle”

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