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Subject: My choices for lyrics


Author:
Mary
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Date Posted: 07/29/09 7:06pm

I just submitted my choices for lyrics that will show Dan's genius and remain relevant to future generations. These are my choices:

"Long before we come of
Age we yearn to leave the garden
And wrestle with a myth
The hand of fate
Has faintly drawn
But somewhere on the way
We feel our hearts begin to harden
And see just as we learn
To turn around
The garden is gone."

Is there a songwriter alive today that could pen a line like: "And wrestle with a myth the hand of fate has faintly drawn"

2nd choice:

"Well, they say that love is jealous
And they say that love is blind
And they say that love is
Always in a hurry
But the face of love's forgiving
And the face of love is kind
And the grace of love is there
For all to find"


And of course the lines that started it all:

"Love when you can
Cry when you have to
Be who you must
That’s a part of the plan
Await your arrival
With simple survival
And one day we’ll all understand"

If that doesn't stand the test of time, nothing will.

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[> Subject: Re: My choices for lyrics


Author:
Lori
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Date Posted: 07/29/09 9:25pm

Mary,
I really like your picks.
My all time favorite is...


"Love when you can
Cry when you have to
Be who you must
That’s a part of the plan
Await your arrival
With simple survival
And one day we’ll all understand"


I really hope we will.

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[> Subject: Re: My choices for lyrics


Author:
Steve
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Date Posted: 07/30/09 8:28am

I chose:

There's a light in the depths of your darkness
There's a calm at the eye of every storm
There's a light in the depths of your darkness
Let it shine...oh, let it shine

Along the road your steps may stumble
Your thoughts may start to stray
But through it all a heart held humble
Levels and lights your way

May your love be there to guide us
May it always keep us strong
May we walk within your footsteps
As you lead us ever on

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[> Subject: Re: choices for lyrics


Author:
Kelly
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Date Posted: 07/31/09 8:22am

There are so many good verses to choose. I haven't sent in any suggestions, but if I had to choose just one for myself, it would probably be the chorus from Nexus, or a couple lines from Icarus Ascending. But for Peoria, I think they've gotta use Leader of the Band, at least a verse or two for one of the boulders. Where else would it be more fitting than Peoria.

Anyway, you've all picked your special lyrics and I think they all deserve to be on a boulder. So I borrowed a few boulders from John Denver's sanctuary, played around a little, and made a few for Dan. So we can see how they look.

Gonna try to embed them here in my next post....we'll see if it works.

Kelly

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[> [> Subject: Re: choices for lyrics


Author:
Lori
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Date Posted: 07/31/09 10:49pm

Oh My Kelly, that is just beautiful!

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[> [> Subject: Re: choices for lyrics


Author:
Mary
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Date Posted: 08/ 1/09 10:03am

Kelly, thank you so much for doing this. And seeing it helped me reconsider my choices. I think the shorter, easier to grasp lyrics look better. From Part of the Plan, the Gambler, and of course Leader of the Band, which has to be there. How silly of me.

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[> Subject: Re: choices for lyrics


Author:
Kelly
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Date Posted: 07/31/09 8:25am

Part of the Plan

PartofthePlan

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[> Subject: Re: choices for lyrics


Author:
Kelly
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Date Posted: 07/31/09 8:29am

(cool...the first one worked - Mary & Lori's pick :)

Here's Steve's pick - Along the Road

alongtheroad

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[> Subject: Re: choices for lyrics


Author:
Kelly
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Date Posted: 07/31/09 8:32am

And Mary's 1st choice - Empty Cages

emptycages

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[> Subject: Re: My choices for lyrics


Author:
Steve
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Date Posted: 07/31/09 9:34am

Great job Kelly! I think it helps to see the actual lyrics on a setting like you have pictured.

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[> [> Subject: Re: My choices for lyrics


Author:
Bianca
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Date Posted: 07/31/09 1:33pm

Nice Kelly. I like Number 2 best. I also like this one. Dan was so gifted with lyrics. It seems to me this should be put everywhere for all to read and follow.


The good book tells us thou shalt not kill
The truth came shining and it's shining still
But how much blood upon this earth must spill
Before we lay our weapons down
Let us lay our weapons down


B

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[> Subject: Re: So.....you don't think I'm crazy ?


Author:
Kelly
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Date Posted: 08/ 1/09 12:56pm

Thanks everyone! I'm so glad you liked the boulders. I was a little worried you'd all think I was crazy....haha. But it was really fun to do, and I wanted to see how they might look.

I agree Mary, that the short verses look better, but I think the shape and color of the boulder makes a difference too. And I really didn't do a very good job with Empty Cages. I just did another long verse boulder.....for Forefathers, and it looks a little better. I'm thinking that Forefathers may be even better for Peoria than Leader of the Band. What do ya think?

My favorite so far is Along the Road. For some reason it just looks really good. Maybe it's the shape of the boulder. Plus I love that verse. And I really like Bianca's pick, Voice for Peace. That's another favorite of mine, and it's a great statement to have carved into stone.

So, I guess I'll post the new ones up, since nobody said I was nuts.....yet. Thanks folks.

Kelly

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[> [> Subject: Re: So.....you don't think I'm crazy ?/No,


Author:
Diney Boo
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Date Posted: 08/ 1/09 1:16pm

Kelly,
These all look really cool. I dont know how much time and energy you put into making (Photoshop?) these, but thank you. It truly brings them alive.

I hope that everyone is able to make a donation, large or small, to the fund.

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[> [> [> Subject: Re: So.....you don't think I'm crazy ? / thanks


Author:
Kelly
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Date Posted: 08/ 2/09 6:15am

Thanks, Diney. I use a program called PaintShop, it's like PhotoShop but cheaper. They do take some time, but it's fun. And yeah, I will be making a donation. I hope they get enough money to complete the project. It's a cool idea.

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[> Subject: Re: More Boulders


Author:
Kelly
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Date Posted: 08/ 1/09 1:06pm

Bianca's pick - A Voice for Peace


voiceforpeace


And one of my favorites - Nexus

nexus


And one more - Forefathers

forefathers

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[> [> Subject: Re: More Boulders


Author:
Bianca
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Date Posted: 08/ 1/09 3:53pm

My goodness! I'm sure glad someone else has to pick the final choice, because I love them all, they seem so impressive on stone.
Gave me chills to read them. Great work Kelly.

B

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[> [> [> Subject: Re: So hard to choose


Author:
Kelly
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Date Posted: 08/ 2/09 6:30am

Thanks, Bianca. And I'm glad I don't have to make the final choice either. It would be way too hard. I keep changing my mind on what looks and sounds best. I'll leave that to Peoria. What's fun about the "virtual boulders" is I can make as many as I want, and can go back and revise them if I change my mind. Nothing is "set in stone", so to speak :)

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[> [> Subject: Re: More Boulders


Author:
Mary
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Date Posted: 08/ 1/09 6:45pm

I think Peoria does need "More Boulders!" Three isn't going to be enough.

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[> [> [> Subject: Re: How many ?


Author:
Kelly
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Date Posted: 08/ 2/09 6:43am

Mary, is that what was decided on - three boulders? That's not too bad. I thought they would only allow them to have one. So, three is much better. But I agree, they really need a whole field of boulders for Dan's songs.

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[> [> [> [> Subject: Re: How many ?


Author:
Mary
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Date Posted: 08/ 2/09 1:15pm

I don't know how many boulders they've decided upon. I guessed three because that's how many suggestions they're taking per person. But I agree, a whole field is needed. One just won't cut it. We'll have to donate BIG.

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[> [> Subject: Re: More Boulders


Author:
Captured Angel
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Date Posted: 08/ 3/09 7:29pm

LOL - given all the boulders needed to commemorate Dan's memorable lyrics, Peoria should have it's own Stonehenge - only it will be "Danhenge"!

(And Kelly, great job on the boulder depictions!)

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[> [> [> Subject: Re: "Danhenge"


Author:
Kelly
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Date Posted: 08/ 5/09 6:56am

Thanks. And..."Danhenge".....I love it!

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[> Subject: Re: My choices for lyrics


Author:
nancy
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Date Posted: 08/ 2/09 10:21pm

The rocks are beautiful and you did a great job. I really like "Forefathers". Sums up some of his family history which would be nice for the town. Plus you get a lot of words...LOL. Maybe if they only do 3 rocks they will have to be BIG boulders if we only submit looong lyrics. There are just too many beautiful ones that I like. So hard to choose. Do more rocks please...they are so soothing for some reason.

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[> [> Subject: Re: Sidetracked


Author:
Kelly
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Date Posted: 08/ 5/09 6:48am

I have one more I was working on, but then I got sidetracked by the new CD clips. I should try to finish it. It's a little different than the rest. There's plenty more lyrics to use too, but the hard part is finding good boulders to put them on.

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[> Subject: Re: My choices for lyrics


Author:
Mary
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Date Posted: 08/ 5/09 3:32pm

Lest we forget, we will also need a rock for Dan's parting words "Vote Democrat!"

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