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Date Posted: 11:08:57 05/08/07 Tue
Author: Marcelo Antonio Fiúza Coelho (TASK TWO)
Subject: Peer edditing to Viviane(night or morning???) TASK TWO

Dear Viviane, sorry about my delay. I have had some problems in this Forum. I do not know if you are the Viviane who studies with me at night. Because we have other in the morning. Despite of this, pleasure to meet you.


Notice from your text :

A) Your thesis statement is very clear “. There are two more important kinds of input: baseline and negative.”
B) It is not clear your text what means i + 1
C) Your example concerning baseline, occupies a great part of the text. You need to avoid that an example constitutes the principal part of the body
D) You could improve your conclusion and linked it with your thesis statement
E) Your content is very interesting and important for us.


Kisses, from Marcelo fiuza coelho

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