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Date Posted: 15:40:46 05/12/07 Sat
Author: Yuri
Subject: Peer Editing to Ana Karla
In reply to: Ana Karla de Souza Pimenta Domingos 's message, "Task 2-Ana Karla" on 13:13:24 05/12/07 Sat

Ana Karla, you've written a good text. There are some things that I think you should analise:
(V) you've missed an article: a
(1)point of view appears twice in this phrase, maybe you could delete the second one.
(2) you could explain what is thesis statment, I know it is obvious for us but depending who are reading it might not know.
(C) This last sentence sounds to me a little bit confusing


Oral Presentations

Oral Presentation is a talk given to a group in which
you present your views about an issue or (V)topic based
on your readings or research.The way you prepare
an oral presentation is similar to what you would do
for a written assignment.

First you have to analyse your topic carefully,in
order to be able to present it. Then you have to
develop your point of view and persuade your audience
to that point of view you have developed. (1)

The Oral Presentation has three main points that
should be followed: the inicial statement,also known
as (2)thesis statement. The second stage is the body of
your presentation, in the body you have to show the
arguments and evidences which are presented to give
support to your point of view.
Finally , the summary of all arguments you have used
and the restatement of all your points.This is the
conclusion.

There are many things which may help you how to do a
good presentation,rehearsing is one of them. When you
rehearse what you have to present you get more
confident ,and being confident is something essencial
when you want to persuade your audience. If you show
nervousness people may understand you,but being nervous all the time might spoil your presentation and
it may also make you sound confuse,not sure of your
points of view and then the audience will not be
convinced.

Another important advice to follow if you are
concerned in doing a good oral presentation is to be
objective. Be precise and objective everytime you
present something to your audience.Remember you are being
judged and time rund fast.It is quite bad when you are in the middle of your presentation,arguing about something and see that many people are feeling bored
or confused about the things you are saying.

In sum there are many things you should be careful
when you are about to present an oral presentation. It
can be summarized like this: analise your topic
closely, the choice and the development of your topic, followcarefully the three stages of organization-introduction,body and conclusion, doing a
rehearse before presenting, show confidence and be aware if you have organized well your ideas to fit the time you have to show them to the audience.(C)

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