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Date Posted: 14:11:29 05/07/07 Mon
Author: GASPERIM
Subject: peer editing to Arlete-task II

Arlete,
your essay has been very well written.Nonetheless, you didnīt explicit neither the aim of your essay nor the thesis statement in which It was supposed to be highlghted how intelligence is crucial or not for second language acquisition.In addition, check out the words "Knowlegde"(Capital letter?)line 7
"'interfer" (interfers)line8
it is missing in the end of the question"in SLA" line 10
furthermore, pay attention to your paragraphs distribution and try to divide them making correlations through Transitional signals
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