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Date Posted: 18:41:32 04/22/07 Sun
Author: Thaís
Subject: Task One - Peer editing to Marina

It is a great essay concerning exclusively its schematic form – actually, the main purpose of this task. Good and appropriate use of transitional signals to unify and give coherence to the text. Little mistakes – repetition of some words, proper accordance of certain verbs and even a couple of tense issues – can be perceived along the whole text. But the overall meaning got through without deeper problems. And, most importantly, the interest on the subject didn’t get at all affected. So, my suggestion is to revise the text as a whole, looking for those tiny slip-ups, since I’ve considered that the skeleton of the essay was actually very good.

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