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Date Posted: 04:55:00 04/16/07 Mon
Author: Francidéa Freitas
Subject: Re: Task One Group Two
In reply to: Clarissa Azeredo 's message, "Re: Task One Group Two" on 04:24:58 04/11/07 Wed

The introduction was done using the Relevant quotation approach, which made the text very reliable as you cited an expert in the language field.I imagined that you wanted to contrast both methodologies but I think you have informed more than debated .
Your paragraphs were organized,the transactional signs were used effectively and you concluded with another relevant quotation in a very good way.
There are few problems that I would like to discuss with you.
Here they are:
...is been wide... /is being widely or has been widely/
...focus.../focussing/
...domination../mastering/
...opportunity of../ opportunity to/
Please, feel free to disagree with me.I hope I have helped.

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