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] Date Posted: 05:40:28 11/08/07 Thu Consultation Mary holds that glass vase like a parting treasure that might crack under pressure and her story would begin the same... My Nathan James... He was the type of man that rushed to get no where fast and if his head hadn't been attached to my own thoughts, I'd find him staring at the walls with a smile on his face. I'd wonder where he went and wished with all of my might that I could go to that same place. A place that seemed to be filled with happy resolve. I still wonder...Did he find that same place within the fall that lined the streets home? Did he see that orange was orange and red was red, and that blue shy was for the birds? Or did he see that orange was some rusty ideas that fall while passing them by? And did red remind him of all of the times he got burned in life? And did he think that blue sky was the faster route home? Did he grab for this vase while the world got away from him? He bought me roses that died on the seat next to him. And the God lord givith and he takith away but not this vase and all of its imperfections. Mary holds that glass vase like a parting treasure that might crack under pressure; sizing up the air bubbles, reading the made in Japan label on the bottom. Putting it to the light as if to be looking for something that the ordinary eye can't see... Sometimes I wonder why I ever Married Mary while knowing that she's still hanging on to that vase while the ones I've bought are stored in the basement collecting dust. And the only memories that can be had by them are my attempts to make her see that there is more that can be found in them other than what she sees in that vase that she centers her world around. I center my world around wondering why Mary kisses me back like tomorrow will be better but there's always another tomorrow and nothing changes. Sir, what do you make of all of this? Irreconcilable differences and I need $500 down to get the paperwork started. Always Lisa copyright Nov, 2005 [ Next Thread | Previous Thread | Next Message | Previous Message ] |
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Author: andy [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 09:35:12 11/08/07 Thu Mary holds that glass vase like a parting treasure that might crack under pressure; sizing up the air bubbles, reading the made in Japan label on the bottom. Putting it to the light as if to be looking for something that the ordinary eye can't see...<<<<<<<<< Wow! You touch upon something here that has always made me wonder about relationships. Where does the love go when it leaves? I wonder if there is only so much of that energy in the world that if you don't protect does it it goes where it is better taken care of? Lis---------- you rock! thanks, andy [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Sasha [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 13:12:16 11/08/07 Thu Quote: ~ I have to tell you, you have a fan here, Lisa!!!!! and this piece drew me in...the title grabbed my attention and piqued my curiosity, but your words held me from the start, to that killer closing.....very well done!!!! *hugs* Sash xx  [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Barry Big Dog [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 14:09:17 11/08/07 Thu Give it up fill her cup she tells her tale and i'm waggin tail Hound Dog jumpin fences runnin the big deer down barkin atcha [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: andy [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 19:59:20 11/09/07 Fri Lisa, read this again. Needed a break from the real world. When nothing seams real it's only because it is. You have the power in your pen. Write more! That's all I say from a distance. Write more! sakldfsjadkfs [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Christine [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 09:57:21 11/24/07 Sat I like it "I center my world around wondering why Mary kisses me back like tomorrow will be better but there's always another tomorrow and nothing changes. Sir, what do you make of all of this? Irreconcilable differences and I need $500 down to get the paperwork started." Wow.....I'm definitely going to read more and more! ~Hugs~ [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: kristen. [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 12:32:28 12/16/07 Sun you are such an amazing writer, especially in the way you tell a story. i'm look everyone else -- totally hooked! [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Bagger Vance [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 09:35:02 01/18/08 Fri again friend poetess.... he liked your write muchly, aye, much so.. praises indeed for your pen [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |