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] Date Posted: 07:19:20 12/01/07 Sat (I added some mood music. My playing is less than stellar; so, I hope it doesn't ruin your hearing :) ) Chicken Simile Link to Audio. There’s a dead chicken in my driveway. Apparently rode in late last night. Slumped over the handle bars like, well, like a dead chicken. Don’t know where Max is. Dumb ass dog. I swear I’m gonna chain his ass up. I got a dead chicken in my driveway and a lost dog. Then Billy comes by. Stood at the bottom of my stairs. I poked my head through the screen door and listened to him tell me about his dead chicken. The one slumped over the handles bars of my motorcycle like, well, like a dead chicken. Billy’s a big boy. Apparently raises chickens. An epiphany – seeing as how Max had gone missing – that made me slump my head like, well, like a dead chicken. So I got my dead chicken head slumped barely through my screen door while Billy stands at the bottom of my stairs telling me how he ran my dumb ass dog Max - with his tail slumped between his legs like, well, like a dead chicken - out of his chicken pen. So Billy and I stick our chests out and scratch a little while like, well, like a couple of chickens. Then I agree to keep Max – my dumb ass dog – chained up, and Billy agrees to have me over for fried chicken and corn bread. Then Billy walked off with that chicken slumped over his shoulder like, well, like a sack of potatoes, and I crawled under the house like, well, like a snake to get Max – my dumb ass dog – who was cowered in the crawl space like, well, like a dead chicken. Dumb ass dog. [ Next Thread | Previous Thread | Next Message | Previous Message ] |
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Author: Sasha [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 21:54:34 12/01/07 Sat ~ OMG Mick this is even better than the first version.. and your guitar playing is an awesome accompaniment to this hilarious poem... I absolutely love your delivery of this one, my talented friend, this poem ROCKS!!!!! *hugs* Sash xx . [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Paul [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 04:27:54 12/02/07 Sun Mick, Top notch addition to an already awesome piece of poetry and one that rockets this out into another orbit. You are a talent my friend.Loving this all over again, Peace and hope, Paul. [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: andy [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 08:15:41 12/02/07 Sun Mick, Now, that was truly a treat! I am going back to listen again! Dowloaded it and put it in my library so I can play it for friends and family. Awesome~~~~~ thanks, andy [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Mick [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 05:17:39 12/03/07 Mon Thanks everyone. Don't recall if I mentioned it before, but that's a true story. Appreciate y'all listening and the kind feedback. [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Sasha [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 13:39:41 12/04/07 Tue  ~ CONGRATULATIONS on earning your place in the Mantel, dear Mick it's so good to see this piece here... and it gives me an opportunity to listen to it again too :) awesome stuff, dear friend... *hugs* Sash xx . [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |