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Subject: Renga, Anyone? ;)


Author:
Sasha
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Date Posted: 22:04:53 01/05/08 Sat





~ Hey there, fellow Tag'ers :)


after reading Max's gorgeous Renga (in the Form Poetry Suite)

I had an idea! lol

"Ohhhhh, a Renga Chain!!!", I thought to myself ;)

and so here I am...he he

Renga is a short form with 1 stanza in Haiku/Senryu form: 5,7,5 syllable count

followed by a couplet: 7,7 syllable count




so I will start this game off, and the next person will add their couplet
the person after that will write a Haiku/Senryu
and the next person will write a couplet......and so on


so here we go...




stained glass windows weep
through dust particles rising
from pages of life














*hugs*

Sash xx







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[> Subject: Re: Renga, Anyone? ;)


Author:
Paul
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Date Posted: 20:03:44 01/07/08 Mon

Those who call themselves devout,
Bathe in the light of their god

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[> Subject: Re: Renga, Anyone? ;)


Author:
Sasha
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Date Posted: 12:00:27 01/08/08 Tue



humid, the veil clings,
wet to my skin, and dank to
my dominion




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[> Subject: Re: Renga, Anyone? ;)


Author:
Lily
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Date Posted: 15:46:05 01/08/08 Tue

humid, the veil clings,
wet to my skin, and dank to
my dominion

in the wet folds of Saturn
gods run down sweet abandon

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[> Subject: Re: Renga, Anyone? ;)


Author:
Sasha
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Date Posted: 15:52:21 01/08/08 Tue




the drip drip dripping
of leaking taps, leaves a stain
even "Bam" can't shift



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[> Subject: Re: Renga, Anyone? ;)


Author:
Lily
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Date Posted: 23:09:57 01/17/08 Thu

layer upon layer, time
etches tracks in porcelain

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[> Subject: Re: Renga, Anyone? ;)


Author:
Sasha
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Date Posted: 04:31:56 01/20/08 Sun





in dreams we reach out
beyond the stars, to take our
place upon the moon



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[> Subject: Re: Renga, Anyone? ;)


Author:
Lily
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Date Posted: 12:43:19 01/21/08 Mon

in dreams we reach out
beyond the stars, to take our
place upon the moon

where we shall plait blazes
and hush frozen fantasies

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[> Subject: Re: Renga, Anyone? ;)


Author:
Sasha
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Date Posted: 15:58:29 01/21/08 Mon

ohhh lovely, Kel




beyond the coming
inner storm, shall you know the
warmth of rain, cleansing



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[> Subject: Re: Renga, Anyone? ;)


Author:
Paul
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Date Posted: 19:55:45 01/21/08 Mon

beyond the coming
inner storm, shall you know the
warmth of rain, cleansing


Which always cleans much better,
If you add a touch of Bam!

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[> Subject: Re: Renga, Anyone? ;)


Author:
Sasha (lol...you plonka, Paulie!)
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Date Posted: 10:46:23 01/22/08 Tue




summers breath falls thick
licking restless limbs, kicking
off night's covering




what an icky sticky night...ugh

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[> [> Subject: Re: Renga, Anyone? ;)


Author:
Lily
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Date Posted: 02:05:54 02/02/08 Sat

summers breath falls thick
licking restless limbs, kicking
off night's covering

who wrapped this sheet around my
legs? and hell, where's my spritzer?


hehe

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