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Author: Jaimie J. (melancholy) | [ Next Thread |
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] Date Posted: 18:10:22 01/08/08 Tue I hope I placed this in the right room... Guess I'll find out, huh? Ask Me My Secrets Ask me for secrets I’ll tell you no lies See that girl, how she’s smiling? When she’s alone she cries. It’s her heart, it is broken Cleaved in half, Shattered in two She’ll smile at everyone But in her eyes Pain shines through She goes home to A house that is empty And bare. She goes there to sleep— Her only reason to Be there She likes to check out The scene As she walks down The street She isn’t pretty or Graceful And she trips over her Own feet Ask me my secrets I’ll tell no lies I’m the girl sitting, Smiling But when alone My heart cries… My heart is broken, Cleaved in half, And shattered in two And I try so hard To keep the pain In my eyes From shining through My home is a house Empty and bare Sometimes I’d rather Sleep outside Than be alone when I’m there. I like to walk down The street Drink in the colors That distract my eyes. I ignore the estranging Stares and the glares Of despise. Ask me for my secrets And in return I won’t lie. My smile is a barrier Though on the inside I cry… I haven't been on in a while to post anything here...sorry bout that...lol [ Next Thread | Previous Thread | Next Message | Previous Message ] |
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Author: Darkerside of light [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 08:09:29 01/11/08 Fri Hi JamieJ The pain of living alone so well done by the pen DSL [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: andy [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 18:55:14 01/11/08 Fri Yes, you have it in the right room for sure! Such a deep journey into that space called "Alone" Thanks for posting your poem here. Glad to read you again and hope you continue to stop by. best, andy [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Sasha [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 03:00:25 01/12/08 Sat ~ lovely to see you again, Jaimie this one aches the heart heavy well done, my friend, lovely to read you again *hugs* Sasha xx  [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Janel [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 21:06:02 01/19/08 Sat Can truly feel the ache in this and can relate, especially when it comes to crying on the inside... that is me as well. I much enjoyed the read Jaimie. Janel [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Max Hardy [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 02:47:54 01/22/08 Tue Hello Jaimie Such strong emotions and feelings evoked with your words, the facade we showe, and what bubbles beneath, and how we walk in the natural beauty of the streets, surrounded by the darkness of the pople we meet. Lonely and alone caught so vividly. Max [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |