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] Date Posted: 06:23:58 01/15/08 Tue Walking with me As I was born I walk A lone Emotions so easily shown In the cold I shiver Where the fingers of the wind touch Be the receiver The giver I talk too much What would I do? If by some miracle Some one pulls me through Then I could stop being cynical Reading every situation with no full stop Or an abbreviation When the hand is held out Fuck this world Except the invitation Walk with me Won’t you just walk with me? Never going to find me easy Kiss me Please kiss me Then please hold me Hold me Sick and tired of these one man shows I’m yours Let devils have all my tomorrows Walk with me By my side no time for pride Do you want me baby? Do you do you want me baby? Eyes so saw Don’t understand no more Please hold me let some one else kick this heart across the floor Treat this like our last walk I will listen and baby it’s your turn to talk DSL [ Next Thread | Previous Thread | Next Message | Previous Message ] |
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Author: Sash [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 17:15:08 01/16/08 Wed "I will listen and baby it’s your turn to talk" ~ good man, Mark....I love this line especially it shows he is willing to hear her side of things... well done, my friend *hugs* Sash xx  . [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Darkerside of light [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 08:14:46 01/17/08 Thu Hi Sash I wish i was a good listener when me and the muse argue no quater is asked and no quarter is given if it was a nuclear war we would destroy each other Cheers DSL [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: andy [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 02:39:10 01/18/08 Fri Mark, Smiling at your comment to Sash. I so get that nuclear war line. These types of poems are places we have all been exposed to at one time or another. The feelings, the questions, and so on. Poems that push the hushed sides of us are more communal than we might care to admit. You remind me of that often. Well done! thanks, andy [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Darkerside of Light [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 02:16:46 01/21/08 Mon Hi Andy your comments and insight to my poems are always and will be of support and great interest to me DSL [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Janel [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 20:59:16 01/19/08 Sat I love this Dsl, i can identify with it and your words i definitely feel. Very well done my friend. Janel [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Darkerside of Light [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 02:18:57 01/21/08 Mon Hi Janel Thanking you and from a fine pen as you your words are of great support DSL [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Max Hardy [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 02:25:39 01/22/08 Tue Hello DSL My friend, you've captured the life walk of so many here, in the pain and need of the journey, so well. I know where you're coming from. So well told. Max [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |
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Author: Darkerside of light [ Edit | View ] |
Date Posted: 03:15:47 01/23/08 Wed Hi Max She did speak and I heard what I feared Thanking you DSL [ Post a Reply to This Message ] |