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Subject: Back to the future


Author:
darkerside of light
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Date Posted: 03:04:51 02/01/08 Fri

Back to the future

I can walk through this door
Then I will not be the man as before
They say I can be anything I want to be
Welcome to this fantasy
New friends
I will be free
New lands
Just supply the ecstasy
Please no one but no one screw this up for me


The air is clear
Bright lights
I can feel some one is here
No rights
No more wrongs
All I can hear
Are great songs

She tends my wounds
It’s then I know I’m going back
Back to the future
No magic wand
No wonder cure
Back to the future
For sure

I walk through a door
Under my feet there was no floor
Take of your clothes
You will not need them any more
Welcome to what you see
Beers on tap
Over there that young lady
She’s your destiny
I close my eyes
Please no but no one screw this up for me

DSL

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[> Subject: Re: Back to the future


Author:
Arunansu
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Date Posted: 03:57:06 02/01/08 Fri

Powerful write, DSL.
"She tends my wounds
It’s then I know I’m going back
Back to the future
No magic wand
No wonder cure
Back to the future
For sure" - Wonderful!

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[> [> Subject: Re: Back to the future


Author:
darkerside of light
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Date Posted: 02:44:51 02/04/08 Mon

Dear A

I'm so pleased you like that verse this means lot to me

DSL

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[> Subject: Re: Back to the future


Author:
andy
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Date Posted: 04:01:19 02/01/08 Fri



I had a dream recently that resembles this
poem so closely it gave me chills.

You are stepping outside of the box
and I applaud your efforts.

best,
andy

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[> [> Subject: Re: Back to the future


Author:
darkerside of light
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Date Posted: 02:46:08 02/04/08 Mon

Gave you the chills

Job done

DSL

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[> Subject: Re: Back to the future


Author:
AnneMarie
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Date Posted: 09:39:15 02/01/08 Fri

Both beautiful and chilling in the sense. Great job here, Kudos~

Kisses,
AnneMarie

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[> [> Subject: Re: Back to the future


Author:
darkerside of light
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Date Posted: 02:47:32 02/04/08 Mon

Hi AnneMarie

Always a pleasure to see you thoughts

DSL

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[> Subject: Re: Back to the future


Author:
Sasha
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Date Posted: 23:30:22 02/03/08 Sun

"I walk through a door
Under my feet there was no floor"


~ I've felt that feeling before, especially when entering into a place I don't know

dreams can completely do our head in at times...and this one sounds like a doozy

well done, dear one

*hugs*

Sash xx


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[> [> Subject: Re: Back to the future


Author:
darkerside of light
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Date Posted: 02:50:38 02/04/08 Mon

Hi Sash
How dreams and reality meet it's then only then can we ever understand anything

DSL

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