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Subject: Kittens at the Door

Author:
Paige

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Date Posted: 16:10:37 12/27/07 Thu

Kittens at the Door

Two little kittens sitting at the door,
one was bored and the other one snored.
The door suddenly opened, and gave them a fright,
so they all wandered off, all throughout the night.

Paige Yeats
10 years old

(aka Maddy's friend)

Posted with permission

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[> Subject: Re: Kittens at the Door
Author: Paul [ Edit \| View ]	Date Posted: 01:25:36 12/28/07 Fri Paige, I am truly loving this, it has a nursery rhyme feel to it, and as I love cats anyway, you got me where you want me! LOL! Stunning work! Peace and love, Paul. [ Post a Reply to This Message ]

[> Subject: Re: Kittens at the Door
Author: tcn [ Edit \| View ]	Date Posted: 08:41:53 12/28/07 Fri This is excellent poetry! Great structure and a joy to read. [ Post a Reply to This Message ]

[> Subject: Re: Kittens at the Door
Author: Sasha [ Edit \| View ]	Date Posted: 19:39:53 12/28/07 Fri ~ hiya Paige waving it's Maddy's Aunty Sash :) it was a real thrill for me to be able to post this poem for you this poem is beautiful, and I can see the kittens so clearly I hope you keep writing, because I'm really looking forward to reading more of your poetry soon hugs Sasha xx [ Post a Reply to This Message ]

[> Subject: Re: Kittens at the Door
Author: andy [ Edit \| View ]	Date Posted: 23:10:52 01/02/08 Wed clapping my hands and giving you a standing ovation! Thanks for posting your poem here. smiles, andy [ Post a Reply to This Message ]

[> Subject: Re: Kittens at the Door
Author: AnneMarie [ Edit \| View ]	Date Posted: 11:22:52 01/03/08 Thu So very cute Paige! You did a wonderful job. I love Kittens! Hugs, AnneMarie [ Post a Reply to This Message ]

[> Subject: Re: Kittens at the Door
Author: kristen. [ Edit \| View ]	Date Posted: 17:47:09 01/07/08 Mon i have to agree with the nursery rhyme feel -- i definitely could see this in a children's book of classic rhymes. :D sweet poetry, enjoyed reading it! [ Post a Reply to This Message ]