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Date Posted: 19:55:16 10/28/24 Mon
Author: Curious
Author Host/IP: 49.196.42.140
Subject: (SFFR) On The Porch (Ok_Bend_4277) - A Review

Warning - This Review Contains Spoilers

On The Porch (Ok_Bend_4277) - A Review

Part One - The Author

The author is one of a crop of new smoking fetish author's who've recently become active.

Part Two - On The Porch

The story is in the third person and concerns a daughters journey to first cigarette over a period of months as she helps her mother light them.

Part Three - Comments

Nick, the Noble Leaf Librarian comments that the story will likely be deleted. The reason for that is fairly clear, while the author is careful to not give the protagonists age, the description is clearly that of someone much younger than the age of 10.(1)(2)

While the story is well written and atmospheric, it's not something that should have been written.

Not recommended.



Notes:

1. Based on my own limited research, even during the 1990/2000s the youngest average age for people experimenting with smoking was in the 12 to 14 year old age bracket.
2. See also my reviews of the 'Early Series' by Love2Smoke, 'Starting: The Story' and 'Starting: The Story - A Sequel' by An263547 and 'How Easily We Forget ' by An6 in the 13th, 25th and 26th volumes of the Consolidated Smoking Fetish Fiction Review Series, for more on my thoughts regarding stories with extremely young starting ages.

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