| Subject: A huge firey explosion appears.. |
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Untamed
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Date Posted: 14:09:47 04/04/02 Thu
In reply to:
Devil's Eye
's message, ">>>" on 13:36:16 04/04/02 Thu
It filled the whole land, it was like an ord filled with a firey inferno, hotter than the hottest drop of lava on the earth, for this was no fire from this world, but from a whole different realm. A frustrated scream filled the air, it came from the center of the burning mass. Suddenly, the fire was gone, but standing there was a truely unbelieveable sight.
There stood Untamed, but not as her usual form, for her body was made up totally of fire. Her eyes were raging embers, her coat a burning pale yellow fire, her mane a white flame that resembled fireworks. She stomped her two front hooves wildly, two burnt hoofmarks appearing upon the soil. One could not stand very close to her, for the heat casted from her firey body would set your flesh aflame! Slowly her lips parted, and words hastily flew out of her mouth. Her voice was so loud, it would deafen any equine that didn't have a purely sinister heart..
"IDIOTS! YOU ARE IDIOTS! THE DEVIL MAY CRY, DMC, BUT YOU WILL BE TOO WEAK TO CRY ONCE I AM FINISHED WITH YOU!!! AND THE REST OF YOU MARES, HOW STUPID CAN YOU BE? YOU COME PARADING ON **MY** LAND, AND EXPECT TO SIMPLY TAKE OVER? I DON'T THINK SO, YOU GOOD-FOR-NOTHING, MINDLESS, BABBLING FOOLS! YOU WILL ALL PAY DEARLY FOR THE FOOLISHNESS YOU HAVE WRAUGHT!"
She reared angrily, she expanded in all directions, causing yet another firey explosion. The flames bursted outward in every direction, barely misssing the Evil ones. But her aim was true indeed, for the inferno wrapped itself around DMC and all of his idiotic little mares, burning off their coat, slowly roasting their skin. Sizzling sounds of their blood boiling could be heard, and anyone nearby could smell the horrifying scent of burnt bodies. When they opened their mouths to scream, the fire leaped down their throats, burning off thier tongues and blackening their teeth, but the worst was still to come.
The fire slowly and painfully trickled down their throat into their stomach, where it gradually began to spin and churn, first as a mild stomach ache, then it got worse and worse and worse. The fire expanded in their stomachs, stretching out their insides while burning the organs near the stomach, the fire kept growing and growing, and soon it would have no place to go..
Untamed laughed darkly at the sight of it, for suddenly their bodies exploded in a mass of fire, ash, and burning organs. Blood and fire fell from the sky like rain, and she basked in it. They were very weak from the beatings of the others, and now they were dead, and could not deny it. She let the blood and fire soak into her inferno-coat, her ember-eyes still wild and fierce, a simple glance from her could cause death to the weak. Most of the Valley was in flames, it looked like she had just created her own little Hell.
(I agree with Devil's Eye, I mean jeez, can't you spell ANYTHING right? You even spelled "Satin" wrong. The correct way to spell "Satin" is "Satan". "Satin" is a smooth cloth like silk, not the ruler of the underworld. I don't care if you can speak German, I suggest you learn more on English before you go and mess up in another language.)
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