Untamed rolled her eyes, "Oh, please." -- The Evil Empire

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Subject: Untamed rolled her eyes, "Oh, please."

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UNTAMED

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Date Posted: 09:01:10 06/27/02 Thu
In reply to: GD and SS 's message, "The colts watched, one in horror, the other in amazement." on 16:44:50 06/26/02 Wed

She grabbed Golden Dream by the mane and threw him off a few yards, there was no blood, for Untamed did not bleed. She wasn't technically alive. She was a great and ultimate Upper Power, so she existed, but did not truly live. She eyed Golden Dream, "Try that again, and I wil do more than toss you off me."

(Okay, I know I powerplay, but at least I do it with some detail! If you powerplay like you just did, "He reared, his still small hooves breaking the soft tissue on her muzzle, and soon red blood came pouring out. He wheeled and bucked, kicking at one of Untamed's legs, breaking it slightly."? That wasn't very good at all. And I don't powerplay that much. So try again, and maybe I'll accept your powerplaying.)

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The colt snorted, regaining his breath from the throw.	GD	10:41:19 06/27/02 Thu
� Scorn � -- � D�v�\|'� G\|�r� �, 22:47:42 06/27/02 Thu "Oh no you won't!" -- GD, 08:05:31 06/28/02 Fri he took off after the colt -- Fire Starter, 20:18:57 06/28/02 Fri � Smirk � -- � D�v�\|'� G\|�r� �, 02:01:51 06/29/02 Sat he catches the colt and places him down -- Fire Starter, 11:05:05 06/29/02 Sat � Follow � -- � D�v�\|'� G\|�r� �, 14:54:27 06/29/02 Sat he smiles and whispers -- Ivory Storm~Soft Words, 16:00:47 06/29/02 Sat