Date Posted:22:43:50 06/25/01 Mon Author:sally Subject: Re: "A Sort of Homecoming" Comments In reply to:
CJHarris
's message, ""A Sort of Homecoming" Comments" on 06:06:39 06/23/01 Sat
>"A Sort of Homecoming" was well characterized.
>Langley's family felt about right. Good continuity
>with the cow farm. Although when I finished reading
>this story, my reaction was "ok," instead of "wow." If
>this episode was actually filmed it would be
>classified as one of those "budget savers." You don't
>have any production value restrictions on paper -
>don't limit yourself.
>
>Please know that I will always be impressed with the
>effort that goes into virtual season. Please keep up
>the good work, and it will only get better.
>
>"Blind Mice" - 7.5 out of 10
>"A Sort of Homecoming" - 6 out of 10
Well, it was my first attempt at scriptwriting. I hope to improve as I do more of it.
