Date Posted:23:54:55 02/08/04 Sun Author:Ken Subject: Re: Respond Please In reply to:
Prateek Srivastava
's message, "Respond Please" on 21:36:35 02/08/04 Sun
Sorry, I really can't grade a sit-com type submission, I am only familiar with sketch writing. If you want to turn it into a sketch it needs to be shorter, like I said. The humor is almost non-existant and there is no real point of obsurdity. The writing never really heightens either, it just sort of keeps going on at the same level. Feel free to grade evreyone else's sketch's too, I normally don't put comments since I am a new writer myself, but just give a letter grade which is better than nothing. Good Luck
