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Date Posted: 09:19:05 03/13/04 Sat
Author: Wes
Subject: March Madness Reviews
In reply to: Patrick Lonergan 's message, "REVIEWS: Ben Affleck 03/13/04" on 00:48:50 03/13/04 Sat

I love March, the NCAA tournament, St. Patrick's day (free drunkeness) ahh... March.

Now, it's reviewin' time:
Grading Scale
1- could be much better
2- average
3- excellent

CO, 2/3, had some good jokes, but was a little wordy in parts.

Monologue, 3/3, you really captured the Jay & Silent Bob thing well. Good stuff

The Jayson Blair Hour n/a (my sketch) PS: I'd like to thank J.P. Ragan for his help on this.

Pool Hustled, 2/3 I liked the line "What part of crazy or retarded didn't you get, the rest lacked in parts.

Zechtinoxophin, 2/3 you get extra points just for the title, other than that, the sketch really wasn't all that funny.

Dollar Bills 3/3 Very good, this sketch was a tad long but, I think you used your jokes quite well Pat.

WU 2/3 The only thing that took this down was the fact that you used the "Hidalgo" refrence twice and the slightly lame Parnell commentary, other than that, good stuff.

LOTRV 3/3 really good JP, you are the man.

Newspaper Clippings 3/3 Very good sketch, CCS. I liked how you ended it, the usual oddness but hilarity of a CCS sketch.

Prison Bachelor 1/3, a little gross for my liking.

Scrabble 2/3 really funny stuff Scott, but like I told you before, there were still some grammar and spelling issues.

Stuart Scott: I’m beginning to think [b]you illiterate John.[/b]

Are you trying to make Stuart speak in ebonics or did you
mean [b] your illiterate John. [/b]

Advertisement Inc. 2/3, had some good lines, the ending was so-so

The Drunken News 2/3 pretty good, but was kinda like your Bush address, wordy.

I'm out! GO WINGS!

Wes

[Fade out to "I'll Stick Around by Foo Fighters]

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