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Date Posted: 22:35:01 11/10/04 Wed
Author: Jim Bevan
Subject: IT's good
In reply to: Prateek S. 's message, "Sketch-Cold Opening" on 21:52:29 11/10/04 Wed

I like it, PRateek. However, I see some points in the early part where there's kind of a gap, where Will should have said something that leads to Seth's comment. Some examples I found:

Seth Meyers:(His annoyed look turns to anger) Well, I hadn’t even thought about that. Thanks for ruining my day, hell, my life.

Seth Meyers: Damn, you’re right! I have no other key characters. I appear in the Update as the crazy Boston guy, and I was the gay DJ in Jarret’s Room. That’s it I got nothing else.

also

Seth Meyers: Oh please!(a beat) That just means I better get some comedic bits fast, or I’m as good as canned.

Seth Meyers: I’m serious, it’s f**king conspiracy. There were 4 new people hired in fall 2001, Amy was promoted to full castmembers mid-season. Therefore she must have been good. Mean-while Dean and Jeff have been fired. The pressure is on me!

See, I just think there should be some segue from a Will Forte commentary. Aside from that, it's still good.

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  • Re: Sketch-Cold Opening -- Patrick Lonergan, 18:58:23 11/11/04 Thu
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