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Subject: change of style


Author:
Animus
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Date Posted: 11:33:36 06/26/01 Tue
Author Host/IP: vcpl3.vcpl.lib.fl.us/150.176.190.7

yo yo
x to the z your crew ain't the only alcoholic family/
you have competition with the first family/
3 drunks with the last name of bush/
even look/
they have a beer named after them,
so you better rip they heads off/
and hold them for ramson till your richer than bill gates from microsoft/
ayo as i look into the world and describe my thouhgts/
it seems to me that they should legalize pot/
7 out of 10 smoke the cron/
and our last preisdent will soon end up being a con/
doesn't seem to you that we see bill clinton more than that guy named bush/
lets put that guy on the egde of the grande canyon and give him a push/
rip apart his brain and let him collect his thoughts/
give him cumaden to thin out his blood so he won't have a blood clot/
then i see my pic on the cover of new york times/
with a paragragh for all my crimes/
from the burgh to the sunshine state/
i gotta grab that nine and watch the slug penetrate/
your vital organs/
then i choke you like i was a python/
bite the piss out of you with venom/
from a diamond back/
out

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[> Subject: rating


Author:
excellence
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Date Posted: 12:14:26 06/26/01 Tue
Author Host/IP: spider-th011.proxy.aol.com/152.163.213.46

yo i dono dis was aight in some ways but in all truth i wasnt feelin it all too much i thought the topic was weak except the chronic part cause i smoke and dat shit prob is true, you're vocab needs a little bit of improvment, i seen betta from you ill give it 6-10
peace

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[> Subject: Re: change of style


Author:
PiErCe
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Date Posted: 13:01:03 06/26/01 Tue
Author Host/IP: 177warp97.newtel.com/142.163.97.177

Not bad yo, 7 here dont ask just felt it, but not 2 much...

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[> Subject: aight..


Author:
911 a.k.a. Play
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Date Posted: 13:21:18 06/26/01 Tue
Author Host/IP: spider-mtc-tf014.proxy.aol.com/64.12.103.24

it was good.. i liked the part bout beer n bush.. lol but the rest was decent.. i think u need a lil bit of work on vocab.. maybe a lil on flow n then you'll have it..

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[> Subject: AINT YO BEST AT ALL


Author:
D LYRIC
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Date Posted: 13:36:43 06/27/01 Wed
Author Host/IP: spider-ta051.proxy.aol.com/152.163.205.66

MAN I WASNT FEELIN IT AT ALL.....I SEEN WAY BETTER FROM U..ELEVATE AIGHT U IZ WAY BETTA DEN DAT.....5/10......WORK HARD AND ULL BE AIGHT!!!!!!

D LYRIC

"WHEN I LOSE TO SOMEONE SUPERIOR I ALWAYS ELEVATE"-D LYRIC

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