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Subject: well.. Author: 911 a.k.a. Play [ Next Thread | Previous Thread | Next Message | Previous Message ] Date Posted: 06:06:35 06/27/01 Wed Author Host/IP: spider-mtc-tf033.proxy.aol.com/64.12.103.33 In reply to: ~ Xplosive 1 ~ 's message, "Excellence are U up for a battle" on 12:27:56 06/26/01 Tue well first off xplosive you gotta cut down on the length of your bars or at least make them rhyme within them selves n then with other bars other wise no one wants to read them.. second of all i wasnt feelin part of it.. excellence i liked how urs flowed.. probably needs a lil work but it was pretty good.. my vote is for excellence.. [ Next Thread | Previous Thread | Next Message | Previous Message ]

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[> Subject: AN EASIER ONE TO FLOW Author: ~ Xplosive 1 ~ [ Edit | View ] Date Posted: 08:55:29 06/27/01 Wed Author Host/IP: NoHost/12.88.114.186 Ayo to test how Xcellent U are let see how fast U can be poisoned with hyosyamine// Your shit has been trash xcept for some of the shit U said in the first five lines// Dump U in the oceans salt getting your eyes C what happens if U can be euryline// Punchlines all over your spit wannabe your ass is definetly not Korrosion// Stick up your ass anything in your mouth that U were smoking// At a restaurant put ya in a fridge when chefs come to get meat find U all frozen// Explaining your fate for the 10th time so U would be completely filled in// That might be the your resting place where u were never found and killed in// U have nothin to live for anyway u pay child support but can't see your children// Whatever bullshit U posted before U got me in a rage U should not have post it// Xplosions I cause make U end up with fevers till I gets worse then it is infectious mononucleosis// Another important component is that U will have damaged inner walls atherosclerosis// X- stands for what happens to nigga they often get Xterminated// P- stands for proof that I kill niggaz even if in God's image they were created// L- stands for how U are going to lay low till it blows over so maybe I can delay it// O-stands for how niggaz that oppose deny U knew my name like the Apostle David// S-stand for no sincerity on niggaz if I do ya better be grateful and should praise it// I- stands for that I am almost invincible knock U out till amenisa// V-stands for how many times U got played my hoes that maxed out your visa// E- stands for the death U will have a happy death some shit called euthanasia// 1- means I am the only nigga in this case that will strap U to an internal machine// To survive this shit your ass need to be a motherfuckin superhuman being// Like me crush niggaz that stand in my way cause I am the one and only juggernaut// Tie U up to rockets to see how xcellent U would be as an MC/ an unexperience astronaunt// If U come back give a thing for all your troubles outta kindness I give U a presents// Inside a dead body see how fast your ass would pass out cause the smell is unpleasant// Didn't expect that comin U were to slow cause of your overdose of those damn depressants// Slap ya around to wake ya up in a gas mask while U inhaling the fumes lungs bursting I ain't kinding// Suggest U don't take it personnal this is the way I make a fuckin livin// [ Post a Reply to This Message ]