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Subject: Fyre


Author:
Fyre
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Date Posted: 18:39:53 06/27/01 Wed
Author Host/IP: spider-tl023.proxy.aol.com/152.163.207.183

Each and every line I spit
Procicly picked
like a afro stick
I got a handle
now get a grip
on this lyrical script
I was born to spit rhymes
blowin the best of minds
like putting a teck 9
to the craneum of Einstein
Snach something from me
and I'm killing you from behind
let the autopsy read
this was never a living kind
terminate everything in the area
for 100 mile radious
there is nothing even close to this lyrical pretitor
I stay a step ahead of ya
so if I fall back
I just clap some cats
make em calaspe
and be back like that
I hold gats that clap
put two throw ya fitted cap
have your girl head in my lap
look like she knoding to the rap
just turned 14
bout to have muti platnium plack
I pop shots from the gat
I hope you ain't asmatic
you can't run from these slugs
you bout to be ass backward
HOLLA

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[> Subject: Re: Fyre


Author:
JT aka KØRRØ§ÎØÑ
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Date Posted: 19:19:33 06/27/01 Wed
Author Host/IP: spider-wj013.proxy.aol.com/205.188.198.23

this rhyme was aight...could've extended your bars A LOT...some OK vocab, i'd give it a 6 outta 10...extend your bars and you'd be better off

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[> [> Subject: Re: Fyre


Author:
Fyre
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Date Posted: 17:16:19 06/28/01 Thu
Author Host/IP: spider-wj033.proxy.aol.com/205.188.198.33

Thinks dog but remember I'm only 14 so I'm not at my best yet but I'm trying

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[> Subject: hmmmm


Author:
excellence
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Date Posted: 19:48:21 06/27/01 Wed
Author Host/IP: spider-mtc-tj022.proxy.aol.com/64.12.106.27

yo i liked dis shit it was aight, like korrosion said you could extend yo lines a little, and ur vocab could be extended a little also, but all in all i liked dis it was some hott shit 61/2-10
i gave it that cause it was good, but nothin was eyebrow razing

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[> Subject: dogg, i'm 14 too


Author:
JT aka ~KØRRØ§ÎØÑ~
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Date Posted: 17:20:29 06/28/01 Thu
Author Host/IP: spider-wk074.proxy.aol.com/205.188.198.184

dogg, i'm 14...and watch how i rip shit...peep it 2night

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[> Subject: ok..


Author:
911 a.k.a. Play
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Date Posted: 18:46:54 06/28/01 Thu
Author Host/IP: spider-mtc-tf031.proxy.aol.com/64.12.103.31

well this reminds me of how i was writing about a year and a half ago.. i've come a long way.. but i can appreciate this.. like the others said elevate n this is the place for it.. peace

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