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Subject: Yo please rank 1-10/and tell me what i need to work on i want everyoens opinion


Author:
XRATED
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Date Posted: 20:29:52 07/01/01 Sun
Author Host/IP: spider-wq084.proxy.aol.com/205.188.200.202

XRATED SPITTING UP A OTHER FREESTYLE HERE, U ALL BETTER LISTEN CAUSE IT GOES LIKE THIS

Back in the day Listening to NWA/
The real NWA like Ice Cube Easy E and DR. DRE/
But shit in this world can happen good or bad/
Like When Easy E and Dre split up cause they were Mad/
Over some manager stealing there money/
Yo thats the reason Rap buissness is kind of Funny/
Rap buissness make people change in mysterious Ways/
Seems like most of these rappers only last a couple days/
Cause they lose fun for the game because it seems rap is all about drugs and Hoes/
Seems more to me rap is about Shows and Ill Flows/
Filling up the seats in all the rows/
People all screaming out ur name mad loud/
Taking over the minds of the entire crowd/
People standing up claping/
Just getting up on the mic and snapping/
But now days it seems like rap aint real/
Seems like they just talking shit that they could never feel/
But dont get me wrong theres some ill head on the stage/
But the thing is rappers supose to get better by the age/
Rap buissness seems hard to say in these times/
Cause seems like all of them are punks committing crims/
But let this be known Tupac And Smalls had the illest rhymes/
Those probably the 2 best rappers to ever Touch the mic/
Yo it seems like there words were more dangerous then a metal spike/
Everyone listened to what they had to say on the subject/
Now these days no one listens cause most rappers are a reject/
But shit goes down so fast it makes ur whole head nautious/
Like Biggie and Tupac they should of been a little cautions/
The illest in the rap game now 6 FEET UNDER/
That day it u heard the rain and Thunder/
The murdiers are still a wonder/
But the rap game all about gangs/
Rappers are very similar to arranatangs/
STicking out there shop fangs/
Then something goes down then no ones around/
Cause no one takes the blame when someone hits the ground/
Thats why rap is a dangerous habitat/
This is the reason why u got to attack like a ravaged cat/
Take control now for forever hold ur words/
Cause people treat u like they treat there terds/
They flush u out back in the ocean/
They use u up like hand lotion/
Thats why in the rap buissness it takes 100 percent devotion/
Then hope someday u will blow up like a deadly Explostion/

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[> Subject: ah yo dawg post somethin else id consider dis like a poem of some sort ILL AS FUCK THO


Author:
excellence
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Date Posted: 02:27:14 07/02/01 Mon
Author Host/IP: spider-ti074.proxy.aol.com/152.163.194.209

>XRATED SPITTING UP A OTHER FREESTYLE HERE, U ALL
>BETTER LISTEN CAUSE IT GOES LIKE THIS
>
>Back in the day Listening to NWA/
>The real NWA like Ice Cube Easy E and DR. DRE/
>But shit in this world can happen good or bad/
>Like When Easy E and Dre split up cause they were Mad/
>Over some manager stealing there money/
>Yo thats the reason Rap buissness is kind of Funny/
>Rap buissness make people change in mysterious Ways/
>Seems like most of these rappers only last a couple
>days/
>Cause they lose fun for the game because it seems rap
>is all about drugs and Hoes/
>Seems more to me rap is about Shows and Ill Flows/
>Filling up the seats in all the rows/
>People all screaming out ur name mad loud/
>Taking over the minds of the entire crowd/
>People standing up claping/
>Just getting up on the mic and snapping/
>But now days it seems like rap aint real/
>Seems like they just talking shit that they could
>never feel/
>But dont get me wrong theres some ill head on the
>stage/
>But the thing is rappers supose to get better by the
>age/
>Rap buissness seems hard to say in these times/
>Cause seems like all of them are punks committing
>crims/
>But let this be known Tupac And Smalls had the illest
>rhymes/
>Those probably the 2 best rappers to ever Touch the
>mic/
>Yo it seems like there words were more dangerous then
>a metal spike/
>Everyone listened to what they had to say on the
>subject/
>Now these days no one listens cause most rappers are a
>reject/
>But shit goes down so fast it makes ur whole head
>nautious/
>Like Biggie and Tupac they should of been a little
>cautions/
>The illest in the rap game now 6 FEET UNDER/
>That day it u heard the rain and Thunder/
>The murdiers are still a wonder/
>But the rap game all about gangs/
>Rappers are very similar to arranatangs/
>STicking out there shop fangs/
>Then something goes down then no ones around/
>Cause no one takes the blame when someone hits the
>ground/
>Thats why rap is a dangerous habitat/
>This is the reason why u got to attack like a ravaged
>cat/
>Take control now for forever hold ur words/
>Cause people treat u like they treat there terds/
>They flush u out back in the ocean/
>They use u up like hand lotion/
>Thats why in the rap buissness it takes 100 percent
>devotion/
>Then hope someday u will blow up like a deadly
>Explostion/

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