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Subject: Chapter 9


Author:
Jacqui
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Date Posted: 15:48:32 11/05/01 Mon

I just read chapter 9 and I am absolutely apalled at Justin's reaction to Jordan's accusations where was the yelling?!?! He should have atleast been mad at her and try to defend himself and claim his innocence (that is if he is innocent!) No way should he have been calm and Jordan should have pushed him to tell her what was going on. And JC and April.... Oh my poor JC! As punishment to her for acting the way she's been JC needs to give her the cold shoulder NOT trying to make plans with her. Jordan and JC need to show some anger dern it! If I was in that situation there would be no way in the world I could just sit there and now that there is a possibility that my husband or girlfriend in JC case could be cheating on me. I would have had a confrontation by now SOMEBODY would've given me some answers. But anyway let me quit telling you how to write your story and say "Great Job so far!"

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Hey girl, first off thanks for posting and I'm glad you liked the chapter, even though it frustrated you. Hopefully you didn't pull your hair out! :) Anyways, Justin's reactions I thought were very fitting to the situation. He seems like the peacemaker type, so his initial anger at Jordan's outburst would cause him to walk out, waiting until both he and Jordan had calmed down somewhat to discuss things rationally. Or something. I'm babbling. Anyways the next update will be coming out soon, I promise I won't leave you hanging too long :) Peace and thanks again. (NT)Jen16:19:07 11/07/01 Wed


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