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Date Posted: 18:41:41 02/17/04 Tue
Author: firechilD
Author Host/IP: 203.48.107.226
Subject: Re: New Fanfic: (BtVS, Post-Chosen) Two Hearts- part 1
In reply to: Kuzibah 's message, "New Fanfic: (BtVS, Post-Chosen) Two Hearts- part 1" on 18:22:25 02/12/04 Thu

Back to work myself after a long week-end, and a welcome surprise. Thanks for the fic, and I hope you had a good Valentines Day.

Your comment about Andrew left me a little confused, but I'm sumising that he appears in an upcoming Angel ep with some more "Storytelling".

Moments I really loved:

Buffy talking about her feelings when Mrs Riley showed up.

Buffy: A big vid-fest. Tomb Raider for you, Pirates of the Caribbean for me. LMAO

Xander looking to Willow for the "almost imperceptible nod" before he could show his happiness for Oz.

The collection of Vids they watched, including "a real comedy" and the one with the "vulgar flute girl".

'Oz came forward to greet them, shaking their hands with a heartfelt, “hey.” ' So perfectly Oz.

Kennedy and Dawn playing darts. (When in Rome ...)

Willow's description of her feelings for both Oz and Tara.

Oz smiled fondly at his bride-to-be. “You’re a lucky man,” Xander said quietly. “Thanks,” Oz said, NOT TURNING HIS HEAD.

Xander keen to work with his hands again.

“There’s still time,” Buffy said. “I know sometimes when you say it out loud, it clears your head, and you realize what you said wasn’t how you really feel. When Riley left…” Far too often everything said by characters is taken as the total truth, when in life, none of us speak perfectly all the time (or even most of the time)

'Xander opened his arms to her and she stepped into the circle of them.' Both the action, and the phrasing you used. Beautiful.

Giles as Xander's father. That's not something that's really occured to me before either, but now seems so obvious.

Thanks again, Kuz. Love your work. As always.

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[> [> Thanks. I'm glad you liked it. -- Kuzibah, 08:45:25 02/18/04 Wed (12.175.117.195)

And I'm glad everyone liked the Giles and Xander moment. I was a little worried about it.

And I'm working on a sequel about Xander meeting up with the Circus now. Watch in March...


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