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Date Posted:09:26:46 12/14/02 Sat Author Host/IP: cache-dm07.proxy.aol.com/205.188.209.75 In reply to:
Jagchina
's message, "Tire Swing" on 02:44:59 12/14/02 Sat
Welcome to the Poetry Carnival! Excellent poem with a nice flow and rhyme. The couplet rhyme does well here. :) To me, I received two impressions from the poem: revisiting a childhood spot/memory and also it seemed as though it was a metaphore for life as well.
Hope to see more posts :)
I enjoyed the imagery of these lines in particular:
"ealing with blue sky and heavenly wind-burn."
He’s blind all the same but insists he hears creaking."
