VoyForums
[ Show ]
Support VoyForums
[ Shrink ]
VoyForums Announcement: Programming and providing support for this service has been a labor of love since 1997. We are one of the few services online who values our users' privacy, and have never sold your information. We have even fought hard to defend your privacy in legal cases; however, we've done it with almost no financial support -- paying out of pocket to continue providing the service. Due to the issues imposed on us by advertisers, we also stopped hosting most ads on the forums many years ago. We hope you appreciate our efforts.

Show your support by donating any amount. (Note: We are still technically a for-profit company, so your contribution is not tax-deductible.) PayPal Acct: Feedback:

Donate to VoyForums (PayPal):

Login ] [ Contact Forum Admin ] [ Main index ] [ Post a new message ] [ Search | Check update time | Archives: 1234[5]678910 ]
Subject: Castle Fear


Author:
Morcastlin
[ Next Thread | Previous Thread | Next Message | Previous Message ]
Date Posted: 22:45:32 07/15/02 Mon
Author Host/IP: cache-rb08.proxy.aol.com/152.163.188.40

Castle Fear

On a night all dark and dismal... I, in flight with winds abysmal,
Searched for soft and sweet asylum within the walls of Castle Fear;
There which I spied the swarthy lord while from his hip hung glory's sword,
Yet I could not have ignored his haunted, wide-eyed gaze so clear;
For memory's gaunt, ungainly ghost brightly burned his eyes so clear...
Still, he did not shed a tear.

He glanced at me then turned away, as I chanced not a word to say,
I know not to this day why fate brought me to Castle Fear;
For I, a drifter, sought relief, even though it would be brief...
From the edgy, aching weather -a storm set to breaking near-
The storm, so proud and powerful, reminds me that it's time draws near;
So, opened the jaws of Fear.

The candleglow -a warm amber- lit the way to my guest chamber,
Aghast, I sensed a shade's anger, as though my soul became a seer;
Open, I pried the oaken door -perhaps to find the lost Lenore-
But as before, there stood nothing, 'twas just a darkened room of drear;
The chamber all stark and heavy with a heathen's soulless drear...
Low, I whispered, "nothing's here."

No evidence of flesh and bone, though I know I'm not alone...
Oh, I know I'm not alone, my soul does sense a presence here,
Something mad with sorrows followed, knowing that the morrow's hollowed;
Chilled and shallow is this thought -a thought that leaves me feeling queer-
So, I fled the room in haste, escaping from the thought so queer;
For I know something is here.

I rushed forth along the hall -my thoughts and feelings all a squall-
I swore hotly at fate's call, the call that brought me to Castle Fear;
And once again I spied the lord -with him his long and heavy sword-
Then, I feared we'd have a word... a word I did not wish to hear,
"Death," he groaned to me deeply -it was too much for me to hear-
"Death to all in Castle Fear."

Terrified, purely engrossed, the lord I spied surely was a ghost;
Boast of frightful fascinations such as slicing off my ear,
Weak and pallid -with whistling breath- suddenly certain to meet my death,
As his sword from sheath then severed -the spirit seemed so sincere!-
Murderous, he reeked of madness, a sad gladness most sincere...
"A slow death to you, my dear!"

-To be continued

*Lenore is in reference to E. A. Poe's "The Raven" from which the form was based.

c2002Bonnie B. Hayes

[ Next Thread | Previous Thread | Next Message | Previous Message ]

Replies:
Subject Author Date
Re: Castle FearTed Yahraus07:03:41 07/16/02 Tue
Re: Castle Fearicyheart07:16:14 07/16/02 Tue


Post a message:
This forum requires an account to post.
[ Create Account ]
[ Login ]
[ Contact Forum Admin ]


Forum timezone: GMT-5
VF Version: 3.00b, ConfDB:
Before posting please read our privacy policy.
VoyForums(tm) is a Free Service from Voyager Info-Systems.
Copyright © 1998-2019 Voyager Info-Systems. All Rights Reserved.