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Subject: that was then


Author:
angelofire
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Date Posted: 00:12:56 08/14/01 Tue

that was then

our love ~ hybrid of fire and ice
fusion of our wrongs and rights
synthesis of forced goodbyes

us ~ safely dangerous
faithfully treacherous
reliably perilous

you ~ subdued desire
crucial, yes my fire
element required

me ~ uncertain you think
precipice ~ on the brink
fall ~ but i don’t sink

now ~ love essential
cerebral ~ mental
planned ~ accidental

then it began
at rest ~ we ran
don’t understand

mind recalls when
start was our end
but ~ that was then

our future is up for renewal
warranty for past just ran out
my hand still aches to be in your
soul’s pocket
you did not lose me on that last emotional u-turn
the phone line that died is screaming loudly
and
you have consumed me
with your roses again
your hands of non~innocence
sprinkled with cinnamon ~

oh that silence?
that was then…

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[> Subject: Re: that was then


Author:
Red Barchetta
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Date Posted: 00:56:08 08/14/01 Tue

This line here is sweet!


me ~ uncertain you think
precipice ~ on the brink
fall ~ but i don’t sink

Fantastic writing!
:)

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[> [> Subject: Re: that was then


Author:
angel
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Date Posted: 01:14:59 08/14/01 Tue

thanks red!!
i finally learned that you have to do an 'accept' before you go back to main message board!!

slower than molasses in january angel here.......

thanks for your comment!!
glad u liked!

take care!

love
angelofire

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[> Subject: Re: that was then


Author:
livingdeadgirl
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Date Posted: 23:14:01 08/14/01 Tue

Angel!

I love your flow... And I LOVE this part (the end)

"our future is up for renewal
warranty for past just ran out
my hand still aches to be in your
soul’s pocket
you did not lose me on that last emotional u-turn
the phone line that died is screaming loudly
and
you have consumed me
with your roses again
your hands of non~innocence
sprinkled with cinnamon ~"

Very eloquent use of our language.. :-)

Peace,
Ldg

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[> [> Subject: Re: that was then


Author:
angel
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Date Posted: 01:04:23 08/15/01 Wed

hey girl!!

am glad you liked!!
hope its not getting boring and repetitive.....
i need to write more new stuff...
but well i have to be really inspired to ...

thanks as always, so appreiated
love ya girl!!
love
angel


>Angel!
>
>I love your flow... And I LOVE this part (the end)
>
>"our future is up for renewal
>warranty for past just ran out
>my hand still aches to be in your
>soul’s pocket
>you did not lose me on that last emotional u-turn
>the phone line that died is screaming loudly
>and
>you have consumed me
>with your roses again
>your hands of non~innocence
>sprinkled with cinnamon ~"
>
>Very eloquent use of our language.. :-)
>
>Peace,
>Ldg

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