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Subject: Dances with the Angels Tonight-*A Mostly True Story


Author:
Red Barchetta
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Date Posted: 11:48:39 08/18/01 Sat

Dances with the Angels Tonight7copy;

The family gathered around
to witness his final exasperation.
To him the grand finale was
nothing but elation.

A fire lit within his heart,
he told them all good bye.
Then a single tear set sail
from the corner of his eye.

His labored breathing ceased
at a quarter after four.
The family shuffled around,
then they slowly closed the door.

The CNAs and RNs
rushed in to do their thing.
Was I the only soul
to hear the angels sing?

After we served all the dinner trays
and the dust of death settled down,
I swear to God I seen that man
dancing down the hall in his hospital gown.

There was a new smile upon his face,
and this was a rare sight.
He couldn't walk two hours ago,
now he dances with the angels tonight.

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[> Subject: Re: Dances with the Angels Tonight-*A Mostly True Story


Author:
Silver Angel
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Date Posted: 19:37:41 08/18/01 Sat

OUTSTANDING...... I'm speechless!!! Totally awesome poem...*bows my angel head in awe of a master* :) !!!

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[> Subject: Re: Dances with the Angels Tonight-*A Mostly True Story


Author:
Just A Mona Lisa
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Date Posted: 23:28:44 08/18/01 Sat

red ... what a beautiful story you told in these words ... wonderfully done ... :)

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[> Subject: Re: Dances with the Angels Tonight-*A Mostly True Story


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livingdeadgirl
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Date Posted: 04:58:55 08/25/01 Sat

Hey Red...

It's already been said BUT great poem, nice story... love the rhyme.

Peace,
livingdeadgirl

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